H/G Story For the Changing Seasons Exchange

[yellowitchgrl]

Title: Final Request

Comments

[arlenerios]

“George, you will need to carry out the annexation of Puerto Rico.”

LOL! As a Puerto Rican, I found that part extremely funny. Well done!
Just so you know, there's hardly any change of seasons down there. ;)

[yellowitchgrl]

Yeah, I meant the crop circle to be in England lol- but I didn't specify :-D OOPS

I'm glad you liked it, at any rate

[flyingcarpet]

hee! A sweet, fun, and funny OBHWF story. I loved the touches on each different member of the family. Nice job.

[yellowitchgrl]

Thanks :-)

[pocketfullof]

Very sweet. Fred was hilarious, and it was a nice look into everyone's thoughts.

[yellowitchgrl]

I guess I'd just imagine Fred wanting to have one last laugh, even in death.

[sas33]

I laughed at the code name and what it really mean't, lovely to see a family tradition started!

[yellowitchgrl]

Thanks! I'm all about odd family traditions

[iphifix]

Hello hello! I'm so sorry I'm late, I've been at the hospital since Tuesday.

Anyway, thank you for an perfectly lovely fic. I love how the pov changes, and how, in the beginning, each person takes solace in their (wo/)man.

It reminds me somewhat of The Westing Game not even in premise, but in tone. It's so playful, I absolutely adore it!

Thank you. :)

[yellowitchgrl]

Yuck! The hospital!? I hope you're doing better now.

You're welcome and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a huge hit of inspiration for it, and sadly it was just not as fluffy as I typically make my stories, but sometimes the muses just go that way.

[iphifix]

Oh this was better than fluff!
Thanks again. :)