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Dec 03, 2005 14:42

Title: I Lost My Fear of Falling
Author: Buddy
Fandom: MCR
Pairing: Gerard/Frank
Rating: Adult
Summary: In which Gerard gets fed up of stalling and takes a leap of faith.
Author's notes: Pov changes from Frank to Gerard in chapter 2. I thought this was complete but the guys disagreed with me. More could follow later.
Beta Reader: Many thanks to cloudsurfingRead more... )

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whimsicalnotion December 3 2005, 16:29:54 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you.

I adore your icon btw.

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whimsicalnotion December 4 2005, 18:33:42 UTC
Thank you very much :)

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renne December 3 2005, 21:31:07 UTC
what i really loved about this was not that it was hot (even though it was) but because it was consistant and amused and the kink didn't take itself too seriously (if there's anything i dislike about fic it's kink that takes itself too seriously, because i'm not a hardcore kink fan).

lines like:
Gerard watched Frank fight with his binding for a bit, looking a lot like a frustrated mutt trying to free himself from the dogcatcher's noose.

and

The shower water was good and hot even if the pressure was approximately as forceful as Coldplay concert,

...really made me laugh (especially the second one) and the "father way" touch was really nice, particularly with the whole priest thing that shouldn't be as sexy as it is. there were just so many good moments in this i'd love to go through and pick them out, except it would just be me going "this was great!" and "so was this!" so i'll refrain.

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whimsicalnotion December 4 2005, 18:45:18 UTC
I'm glad the humour worked; I'm never sure if what amuses me will amuse others so this a definite bonus. Also, I really love your stories so getting feedback from you has made my day. Thank you very much.

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nest_freemark December 3 2005, 22:38:39 UTC
thank god for kink that doesn't make we want to smack the author and send them to sexuality.org to do some research. delicious and not to mention funny. go you! ♥

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whimsicalnotion December 4 2005, 18:49:07 UTC
I'm so happy it worked for you. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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saavira December 3 2005, 23:45:57 UTC
"You're a great lay, Way," *snerks*

Lik, restriction said, I like fics where the characters aren't so seriously about the kink. So keep writing!

Oh yes, and thank you for that image about Frank coming to confession and end up fucking Father Way in the confessional booth even though he just yelled at two teenagers about making out in said booth.

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whimsicalnotion December 4 2005, 18:51:23 UTC
Thank you for that, and I will keep writing.

Oh yes, and thank you for that image about Frank coming to confession and end up fucking Father Way in the confessional booth even though he just yelled at two teenagers about making out in said booth.

OMG! Is there any chance this bunny nibbled your ear enough for you to write it?

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