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Concrit and contact
Always aiming to improve, I'd love to hear your current critique and praise? on how I play Hawkeye.
Is he witty enough? Charming enough? Is there a good balance between the doctor-bit and the practical-jokes bit? Does he flirt enough with the ladies? Do I have his voice down, or does it need a proper polish to get rid of all that OOC grime?
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Ep. 004 - Deal Me Out - text/commentlog
[Filtered to Henry Blake, BJ Hunnicutt, Jackie Estacado, Portgas D. Ace - very hackable]
You're hereby cordially invited to a night of drunken debauchery.
8 pm. Doctors Offices next to the hospital. Bring your own aces.
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Ep.003 - Potter's Retirement - voice;english
[The post starts out with a good few seconds of nothing but fumbling, fingers pressing buttons, brushing up against the microphone. Someone's trying to find a frequency that isn't there anymore.]
I could've sworn that I---
If... if you can't reach a frequency, does that--
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Ep.002 - Dear Dad - Text
I've never been one to hold on etiquette but I do believe two weeks is as long as you can wait with a formal introduction without being rude.
The name's Hawkeye Pierce, ex-Captain, perpetual healer of the sick and all around swell guy, if I do say so myself. I've been told some of you already know me, so I'll try my best to not repeat myself. ( Read more... ) -
Ep.001 - Welcome to Discedo - voice;english
[The post starts with your usual newbie fumbling - fingers brushing over the microphone, buttons being pushed, the distant mumble of someone talking to himself as he investigates this newfangled doo-dah. ]
--kind of like a two-way radio? I was never good with these technical things...
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Eighteen - [text]
Just one thing after the other... we should be used to this by now, shouldn't we? At least the rain isn't melting anything this time around. Never thought I'd say this, but I've missed the color green.
Dr Kureha, do you have a moment? Miranda, I'd like to have a word with you too if you got a minute.
And Kadaj... mind if we wait until all this blows ( Read more... ) -
[intermission]
....Huh.
Looks like we're being invaded.
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Seventeen - voice;english
Looks like everything is back to normal again. Or is it? It's hard to tell if this is the calm before or after the storm.
...don't give up.
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Sixteen - voice;english
And here I was about to ask if anyone had snuck in and committed drive-by poetry, but judging by the sound of the network this isn't just some juvenile prank. Cute, if a bit creepy.
Jesus Christ!
[And there's silence for a moment - give the man a chance to get his heart going again. He sounds a fair bit wound up when he finally comes back on.]
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Fifteen - voice;english
Sorry to disturb you in your monotony, citizens of Discedo, but I have an extremely important question.
Is there anyone out there who is skilled with chemistry and/or mechanics? I'm talking small and sensitive equipment here, something that requires a little finesse.
Mad scientists, undeads and even mounties. There's got to be at least one.
( Locked to Frank || hackable )