Drabble: Imprecisions

Mar 29, 2010 02:38

Title: Imprecisions (1/1)
Beta: canaana
Characters: Rose/Nine/Jack
Rating: All Ages
Spoilers: The Doctor Dances
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction; the characters are the property of the BBC and used here without permission. No money was made.
Summary: Rose is thinking about her blokes.
A/N: Written for the Shadow Proclamation, who bid on me in ( Read more... )

fic: twltb-series, fandom: doctor who, fic: drabble, event: support stacie, relationship: jack/doctor/rose, fic

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wendymr March 29 2010, 00:43:44 UTC
Aww, this is lovely! So nice to see them quietly sleeping together, too. Her first impressions of them definitely ring true, but this:

But if asked now, she'd swear it was love at first sight.

First sights.

Perfect :)

Thank you!

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yamx March 29 2010, 00:54:49 UTC
You're welcome. Glad you enjoyed. Hope the undisclosed member(s) of STP will, too. :)

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kholly March 29 2010, 00:46:51 UTC
Love the dichotomy. Her first impressions were really accurate, and yet it was also love at first sights.

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yamx March 29 2010, 00:55:42 UTC
And her first impressions were *both* completely accurate and totally wrong. *g*

Thanks for commenting!

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juliet316 March 29 2010, 01:22:00 UTC
Very nice.

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yamx March 29 2010, 01:37:05 UTC
Thanks!

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honorh March 29 2010, 01:28:45 UTC
This feels all lazy and sleepy and sexy, and the last lines are truly touching. I love Rose with her boys!

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yamx March 29 2010, 01:37:51 UTC
You're calling my fic writing lazy?!?!?

;)

Thank you. I have a soft spot for them too. *G*

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canaana March 29 2010, 02:52:16 UTC
Wow, the few words you changed made this much stronger. And I'm still in love with the understated poignancy of the last line.

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yamx March 29 2010, 02:59:25 UTC
Well, I had a great beta! :)

Thanks!

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