Saudade (Across from you) [Chapter 3]

[yakuso5u]

Chapter: 3/?

Pairings: YooMin, HoMin (bff), Changmin centric.

Rating: G (warning!: bandfic, includes lawsuit)

Genre: Angst, Romance

Summary: Saudade, it is all that is left of you. How many times I pulled you up, like all the times you pulled me up. Everything we've shared. Now you are gone, and I don’t have a word to express my feelings; it is

Comments

[gompi]

omg the ending DD: so sad

[yakuso5u]

Mianhaeeeee I don't like it either... >.< *holds*

[silentdyn]

Very well written chapter! I actually like that Yoomin wasn't the focus here, because I can see more of Changmin's character and internal thoughts. I didn't know about Changmin being chased when he was younger, but I do know he always had some issues with sasaengs. Absolutely love the last few paragraphs where you described the bonds that the five of them had :) It's very bittersweet.

[yakuso5u]

I'm trying to make the YooMin/HoMin evolve according to Changmin's own growth, so I can't focus on the (b)romance as much as I'd like... and the truth is, I loooove breaking down his personality, so I'm glad you're enjoying it too XDD

Ready your heart for more bittersweet...? I hope I can keep mine whole throughout the entire thing ^^;;

Thanks for commenting! :)

[n3uromanc3r]

Yunho's such a wonderful hyung!
I liked his efforts to make Changmin's birthday perfect!

And Changmin's worries and the whole sasaeng-issue was so frightening, but it made me happy that it seemed exposing those fears in front of the other four - even if it was the last thing Changmin planned on doing - made their bond even stronger...

I don't mind there wasn't any YooMin yet, I enjoyed this Changmin-centric chapter very much too, and now I'm anticipating to next one even more in hope Yoochun will appear finally!

Thank you very much for this wonderful update!

[yakuso5u]

For all his snark, what would Minnie be without Yunnie?? XD *cheesy* And I liked the idea of Yunho doing things for Min without him knowing! It seems to me like the kind of thing he'd do irl...? ^^

I'm trying to make the YooMin/Homin (b)romance evolve as Changmin grows, hence all the Min!centric (and who am I fooling, I enjoy breaking down bias perfectly-flawed-perfection so much XD)

Glad you enjoyed this and thanks for commenting! ♥ Next update is on its way~

PS: I hate sasaengs with a passion u_u

[keyhun]

:'( this is too sad :'((( yeah i remember pictures of that incident. it was way too heartbreaking. i'm so glad he got professional help...

[yakuso5u]

*leaves a heart here for you and one for Minnie, just because*