Coincidences [Part 4] - B

[yakuso5u]

Chapter: 4/4 (part B)

Pairings: HoMin

Rating: PG-13 (mention of heavy themes)

Genre: Romance, Angst

Summary:There are some memories you won't talk about, some things you won't be, some feelings you can't have. There's what your life is going to be. And there's the moment when Chance decides to thwart Fate, and Changmin finds himself facing

Comments

[theshims]

Hi! :')

I'm a fans of this story. patiently waiting for your updates though this is my first time to leave comment.

you wrote beautifully, the angst is so realistic through your words I can feel pangs in my heart ;;

its really big coincidences how all bad things happpened on May in changmin's life. no wonder he believed on Fate, a fate that he created by himself. His savior is Yunho (Min's sister also took big part) to help him going through his own mindset, glad that he's overcome all of his worries..

umm... I'm really bad with comment, there's so much I want to say but its dissapear once I typed "Hi" T___T

thank you for this amazing story, thanks for sharing ^^

[yakuso5u]

Hi! ^^ /

I like to keep stories as realistic as I can~ The best way to touch readers, I think...? :)
I tried to imagine how Changmin would feel, facing such a difficult past and trying to rationalize it. I guess it could've gone many ways but above all, he needed someone to prove him that what he wanted was more important than what he feared... does that make sense? XD

I'm really glad you liked that story! Thank you so much for commenting!! (though I'm repling late, sorry >.<) ♥

[mpoet123]

Gosh, thanks for making it a happy ending. For a moment there i was afraid it's going to be sad...could never bring my self to picture broken homin. The story is very powerful, am sure you're very exhausted after writing it. Looking forward to your next piece

[yakuso5u]

Sad endings are definitely not my thing XD It was emotionally draining right, but at least I knew it'd end well while writing it ;-)

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked this ^^ (and sorry for replying this late...)

[snow_meow]

I suppose there is such a thing as coincidences and those like Changmin's coincidences which rob a person of their sanity.

Perhaps Yunho was Fate's gift to Changmin to tell him that everything that happened in the past is just coincidence and he isn't curse.

Or perhaps Yunho has so much luck that he is able to change both Changmin and his own fate.

Either way, I am glad that Changmin found a reason to live, believe and love.

[yakuso5u]

Yup... I guess the maths and statistics could prove that there are people on Earth that see all the bad happen to them in similar circumstances or smthg like that... which has nothing to do with Fate but is still scary, somehow XD
But I still like the idea that Fate exists so I actually haven't a set opinion about which explanation it is...... *is weird* ^^;

All is well in the end, that's what matters~ Thank you for commenting!! :)

[trish3815]

I am so happy that Changmin got the courage and went to Yunho..
to have so much happen to him in one month.. as if he was blaming himself for everything happening.. Jisoo was stupid..I am glad that Yunho talked with his sister.. being there for him when he really needed him.. when you started writing about the explosion my heart went out to Changmin.. he didn't hear anything else because he just knew he had killed him..I love what Yunho did for him at the end.. to give him a freshly new beginning that wasn't like the lost boy in the woods.. he had the light of the moon and stars to show him the way and that was Yunho being with him.. thanks I did cry when he started explaining his reasoning.. loved it!!

[yakuso5u]

It really wasn't an easy decision to take for Changmin, seeing how caught he was within his own mindset.... and even till the end, a year later he's still convinced he'd cause a disaster again >_<

I like what you're saying about the end... I hadn't thought about it that way myself, but it sounds just right XD Yunho like the light leading him towards... love and life and future, all at once? ;-)

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked this :)

[shinchul303]

"Enjoying the read" is a total understatement.

"It keeps growing, keeps gaining strength, colors, wildness and life."

Pure direct honest poetry, with perfect onomatopoeia!

Just one short sentence amongst countless more that all made me pause, step back, and gasp in wonderment.

You are a master writer in this genre. I honestly believe I've never read a better illumination of what heart-stopping, total change everything love might be.

[yakuso5u]

I guess that's because I tend to read aloud what I'm writing...? ^^ Didn't think anyone would notice but here you go XD

Mmh... how to say. I just wanted to show, on a person's life scale, that a "simple" feeling can end up meaning everything. Because there is no tragedy or death or glory, nothing excessive, it doesn't mean it's not worth mentioning, if you see what I mean ^^

Thank you!! I'm happy you liked this :)