Coincidences [Part 4] - B

[yakuso5u]

Chapter: 4/4 (part B)

Pairings: HoMin

Rating: PG-13 (mention of heavy themes)

Genre: Romance, Angst

Summary:There are some memories you won't talk about, some things you won't be, some feelings you can't have. There's what your life is going to be. And there's the moment when Chance decides to thwart Fate, and Changmin finds himself facing

Comments

[sulking_angel]

Oh this was so lovely /cries. I was so terrified when that news thing came up I thought yunho really did die, I was gonna pass out with changmin ;-;
Changmin's fear was so palpable, and although his fear was kinda irrational, having so many bad things happen in one month would make anyone paranoid and superstitious. I'm glad yunho was there every step of the way, and had always been, if only changmin had put down his barriers enough to see that.
I don't even know what to say, I love this story so much. You have such a beautiful way with words, it makes me wanna read it a paragraph over and over again because I wanna savor every single word. Thank you for updating and sharing ^^

[yakuso5u]

Oh the advantages of being the writer XD Though the second part was really hard to write, even knowing it'd end well ._.

Changmin had to deal with that supposed-curse-thing, but also the fear that Yunho would turn his back on him because of it... and maybe he was even more scared about the latter than the first ^^ So yeah. What he really needed was someone who'd stay with him whatever happens :)

I'm really glad you liked this!! Writing syle included, cos I know it's not necessarily the easiest to read XD Thanks for commenting~ ^^

[momoshika]

Hai.. Thank you for the update.. It`s really worth to wait for.. I really like your fic.. I like the patient Yunho in here.. And I love the non given up Changmin for his love, though he is such a dumb at the beginning.. Anyhoo I really like your fic. Please continue with other stories.. :-D

[yakuso5u]

Changmin needed to be proven some things XD I'm glad you liked this! Thank you for commenting~ :)

[mymelodyisyou]

maybe I'm way too late to comment but this is just a brilliant masterpiece of yours and I don't want to not leave a single word on this beautifully written story ;~;
So that may-curse thing is based on a real-life story? Oh how frustrating it is!
Changmin believes in Fate, the one thing that (he believes) brings all those awful may-curse coincidences to his life. Fortunately Yunho doesn't believe in Fate. And that belief he has erases all those 'coincidences'. I'm happy by the fact that Yunho really won, won against the Fate and won changmin's heart and trust all over again.
You should see my shocked face when I read that gas explosion incident! I thought it really was yunho's turn T_T i thought you'd end this story just like that. Thank God you didn't! uknow, happy ending fits HoMin the most lol
I do love this story and I hope you'll write HoMin more~ Thank u for writing <3

[yakuso5u]

Never to late to comment! XD (though I'm a bit late replying... *fails*)

Ikr... the real life story refused to leave my head and it became a fic XD It's really nice, seeing everyone's opinions about "Fate" or "non-Fate" ^^ I guess what Changmin feared most was that Yunho would end up hating him like Jisoo, and he needed someone to stay by his side whatever happens...? :)

Lol I'm weak.... sad endings are really not my things, even if I need to balance that with my love for realistic stories :P

Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked this :) (and I love your icon....... ♥♥ *random*)

[bubblezzzzzt]

Oh changmin

[yakuso5u]

Jisoo's reaction to his "curse" really hit Changmin hard... I suppose it was very hard for him to love another person after that, not to mention trust them >_< (but Yunho did that just the right way XD)

I'm happy you pointed out that it was far from easy for Yunho! Giving his trust again knowing he'd been deceived so many times in the past already. To be able to forgive and move on. I love that trait in people :) It shows a lot of strength yet a need to be loved as well... strong yet weak, I like that XDDD
(it was supposed to have more parts about Yunho but I didn't want it to be too long and I actually like it that way sooooo.... ^^;)

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm glad you liked this ♥ (and sorry for the late reply... ;__;)

[itslol123]

This story is perfect from begining to end. I do have to say that each chap each line grabbed me. What touch me the most was the lenght of sacrifice changmin was willing to go to spare yunhos lifeand his raw emotions you brought to life. The way u described his feeling when he though yunho was gone was penetrating and so deeply moving. I just want to congratulate you for writting this. It must have taken a lot out of you and believe me when I say that now any story attach to ur name I will have to read it out of necessity

[yakuso5u]

Thank you ♥

Changmin had to deal with a real cruel dilemma... thankfully he took the right decision. But I guess what he needed most was someone who'd stay with him whatever happens, bad or good :)
Lol it was emotionally draining right, had to wrap myself in angst-bubble, but at least I knew it'd end well already XD

I'm glad you liked this! There should be more stories coming though I dunno if it'll be HoMin or not.... anyway, thanks for commenting (and sorry for the late reply... ^^;)