FIC: "Dreaming in Metaphors, Pt. 2" (Doctor Who, Ten/Martha, R)

Oct 24, 2007 11:09

Part One was here, if you missed it.

And now the conclusion:

Dreaming in Metaphors, Pt. 2 )

doctor who, fic, ten, martha

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 16:47:55 UTC
Thanks! I wanted the Doctor and Martha to see things clearly for a while, though only a while. And everything goes better with pugs.

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jadekirk October 24 2007, 15:47:10 UTC
Fantastic!

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 16:48:08 UTC
Thanks so much!

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persiflage_1 October 24 2007, 16:31:47 UTC
Oh thanks - now I'm crying... This was good, but bl00dy sad !

A few more typos:

The whirring of the TARDIS made him breathe easier as the he felt that familiar shiver

as he

I imagine it like checking the oil in a car. Does the TARDIS have a dipstick?

it's

The next morning - around 8 a.m. on that particular day, or six hours after Martha had left her the shift with the penguins

her shift

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 16:48:36 UTC
Glad you liked it! And thanks for edits 1 and 3; 2 is actually what I meant to say, but I fixed the others.

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persiflage_1 October 24 2007, 17:33:22 UTC
Oh, OK on 2 - I did wonder about that, but "it's" seemed more obvious...

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trinity_tragedy October 24 2007, 16:57:08 UTC
You've ruined me. Amazing story though. v__v I'm going to bed now.

T.

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 17:07:42 UTC
Thank you so much!

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vaznetti October 24 2007, 17:39:38 UTC
Wonderful! I loved the paradoxes! But oh, the end. The Tardis takes what she needs, I guess, but still.

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 17:44:45 UTC
I think of the TARDIS as the story's (unsuccessful) yenta. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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