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FIC: "Dreaming in Metaphors, Pt. 2" (Doctor Who, Ten/Martha, R)
Oct 24, 2007 11:09
Part One
was here, if you missed it.
And now the conclusion:
(
Dreaming in Metaphors, Pt. 2
)
doctor who
,
fic
,
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,
martha
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yahtzee63
October 24 2007, 16:47:55 UTC
Thanks! I wanted the Doctor and Martha to see things clearly for a while, though only a while. And everything goes better with pugs.
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jadekirk
October 24 2007, 15:47:10 UTC
Fantastic!
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yahtzee63
October 24 2007, 16:48:08 UTC
Thanks so much!
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persiflage_1
October 24 2007, 16:31:47 UTC
Oh thanks - now I'm crying... This was good, but bl00dy sad !
A few more typos:
The whirring of the TARDIS made him breathe easier as the he felt that familiar shiver
as he
I imagine it like checking the oil in a car. Does the TARDIS have a dipstick?
it's
The next morning - around 8 a.m. on that particular day, or six hours after Martha had left her the shift with the penguins
her shift
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yahtzee63
October 24 2007, 16:48:36 UTC
Glad you liked it! And thanks for edits 1 and 3; 2 is actually what I meant to say, but I fixed the others.
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persiflage_1
October 24 2007, 17:33:22 UTC
Oh, OK on 2 - I did wonder about that, but "it's" seemed more obvious...
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trinity_tragedy
October 24 2007, 16:57:08 UTC
You've ruined me. Amazing story though. v__v I'm going to bed now.
T.
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yahtzee63
October 24 2007, 17:07:42 UTC
Thank you so much!
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vaznetti
October 24 2007, 17:39:38 UTC
Wonderful! I loved the paradoxes! But oh, the end. The Tardis takes what she needs, I guess, but still.
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yahtzee63
October 24 2007, 17:44:45 UTC
I think of the TARDIS as the story's (unsuccessful) yenta. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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A few more typos:
The whirring of the TARDIS made him breathe easier as the he felt that familiar shiver
as he
I imagine it like checking the oil in a car. Does the TARDIS have a dipstick?
it's
The next morning - around 8 a.m. on that particular day, or six hours after Martha had left her the shift with the penguins
her shift
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