FIC: "Dreaming in Metaphors, Pt. 2" (Doctor Who, Ten/Martha, R)

Oct 24, 2007 11:09

Part One was here, if you missed it.

And now the conclusion:

Dreaming in Metaphors, Pt. 2 )

doctor who, fic, ten, martha

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cesario October 24 2007, 17:49:54 UTC
ARRRRGGHHHH.

I...yeah, ok. You are brilliant. Because this whole time, I've been thinking, "oh, this is lovely, but it's a bit more sentimental than I think I can wholly approve for any relationship between the Doctor and...anyone." And then...that happened. And it's perfect. Crushing, but perfect.

“God, you’re turned on. Is this your idea of a threesome or something?”

A+++++++ WIN.

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 18:44:04 UTC
I'm so glad you like! Your opinion means much to me. :D And yeah, to get Doctor shmoop, you (or the TARDIS) must cheat a bit.

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rj_anderson October 24 2007, 17:54:14 UTC
Bzuh. Wuh. *flails*

I can't bear to live anymore! Throw me to the pugs!

Seriously, this was amazing, funny and heartbreaking and beautifully characterized, and after all that you made it fit into canon, which is even more brilliant.

Also, in a host of other hilarious lines:

“Honestly? It looks like Snuffleupagus got his nose wrapped around your throat.”

...made me laugh SO HARD.

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 18:45:59 UTC
Those pugs will get hungry eventually, and you know what happens then. They start begging.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I take that as my true Whovian badge of honor.

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stoplookingup October 24 2007, 18:10:04 UTC
I just love this story. The truth is, as sad as I am about the ending, I have to admit that it feels right. Also, I'm a sucker for stories that completely carry you away, make you happy, and then pull the rug out from under.

I would love to see a sequel where they DO meet again, the Doctor with full knowledge of what happened, Martha with only a vague sense. I'd like to think the love would still be there, even though the circumstances would necessarily be different.

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 18:47:18 UTC
I do feel a bit guilty about the sucker-punch, but OTOH, I really felt like that was how it would have to go. I'm glad you agree, and that you enjoyed it. :)

I have thought of a sequel, but I don't know -- free time is not plentiful these days. How strong is fic farr?

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in_the_end October 24 2007, 18:23:11 UTC
Bloody brilliant!

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 18:47:47 UTC
Thanks muchly!

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in_the_end October 24 2007, 18:51:02 UTC
You're welcome. Just so you know, I've rec'd this on the fic rec posts on lifeonmartha.

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 19:05:38 UTC
Oooh, double thanks!

And double-Doctor icon!

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padawanpooh October 24 2007, 18:33:20 UTC
Gah...

*is dead*

Absolutely fantastic. Excellent plotting; spot on characterisation and heartbreakingly perfect at the end.

I'm saving this one to treasure.

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yahtzee63 October 24 2007, 18:51:17 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm delighted you enjoyed it. :)

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