[DaiUmi] My Fair Lady: Start

[yatsuiko_chan]

Title: My Fair Lady
Chapter: Chapter One: And so they meet.
Characters: Umika Kawashima, Daiki Arioka, Nishikido Ryo (to be added)
Summary: The smart little lady runs away, only to be found by an on-the-run swindler.
Note:
* For nishoken, because she is an awesome supporter of DaiUmi (which is a pairing I never really thought anyone would ship, except for

Comments

[nightbaron079]

LJ ATE MY FIRST COMMENT SO HERE YOU GO (AGAIN).

I love Daiki's role here, and I'm kinda hating Umika on this one but I'll get to liking her eventually I'm sure :) This was a little rough but still good all the same. Some things were a little bit conflicting but the way you wrote this sounds interesting; like I'd turn the (internet) pages to see what's next.

Umika is a brat... a spitefully hateful brat but you kinda get where she's coming from... but still I don't like her so maybe that means you've succeeded in characterization? I dunno, I got defensive when it came to her scene with Hana... /I fail in explaining my thoughts.

Daiki on the other hand is this mysteriously (handsome and adorable) guy that has this unlimited power in his hands but knows when to use it, and use it sparingly. His character makes up for his height, I guess xD

AND THE MANIP XD

Otsukare-chan :) Good first chap :)

[yatsuiko_chan]

Awww bad LJ.

Daiki's role is my dream role for him (and Inoo or Keito lol). Please give me constructive criticism m(_ _)m Why was it rough, or what should I doooooo. /helplesskid

Umika is my favorite character. For various reasons. XD but yeah, she's not like-able at this point. Which is interesting because yaaay more chances for character development! o/ Poor Hana T~T

"You talk big for someone so small" =>Umika's insult that will happen lots in the next few chapters lolol.

THE MANIP WAS MY INSPIRATION OKAY. THE UNBUTTONED SHIRT.

Thanks~~~~~~~!

[nightbaron079]

Yeah xD

Good role! 8Db I dunno, maybe because you were sleepy so it seems a little disorganized? Sentences and such.

Yeah her being unlikeable at this point gives a lot of room for character development :) And yeah I got angry when she talked to Hana like that xD

HEEHEE chibi powers LOL

UNBUTTONED SHIRT. SUDDENLY UMIKA WEARING DAIKI'S SHIRT AS A PAJAMA COMES INTO MIND BEHAVE BRAIN BEHAVE.

Welcome yo~ :)

[yatsuiko_chan]

HAHA My sentence construction skills took a back seat ever since college started /dies. I'm shocked it's only now that someone noted this on me.

Really~? I don't really love Umika either but I think she's my inner self haha. So I'm an evil brat deep inside

SINCE YOU JUST SAID THIS. IT WILL HAPPEN. NEXT CHAPTER. HAHA. FUN.

[nishoken]

OMGG FINALLY THANK YOU YACCHAN >:D< A BIG HUG FOR YOU!!

i'm waiting for the next chapter! hohooh~ next time i'll make you a better manip ^^:

and oh, i'm loving Daiki here @#(ADSLFJ XDD love Umika and Daiki's interactions too tssk, but for some reasons, Umika's role is annoying but then since she's the main character here..maybe little by little..i'll get to like her xDDD loooking forward desu~ <3

[yatsuiko_chan]

*accepts hug*

XD I'll probably post something soon. This pet idea is a pest who keeps on bothering me >///<

HE IS AWESOME<3 Haha I don't even know how, but I can actually imagine Daiki having this kind of drama role. Umika is supposed to be an irritating rich brat, so we'll see how that changes from here XD

[nishoken]

HAHA YAYYY!! <3 pet idea?~ hohoho

I'd like to see him in this kind of role too! i think it'd be nice :3 especially if his leading lady is Umika

[talktoyourpet]

hell this is good! I need more!!! (faints and roll on the floor) MORE!!!

[yatsuiko_chan]

Next chapter will be up soon <3
Omg someone else is reading this *O* You don't know how happy I am to know that /dies

[talktoyourpet]

I'm happy that I actually found a fic to read! I'm dying of stress! (laugh)