Blind Faith 1/?

Jun 28, 2009 20:58

So this is the season 7 story idea I've had for a while. Instead of doing an all out full story structure, I'm going to do small pieces here and there.

Tony/Michelle
PG (for now)

1/? )

tony/michelle, au, blind faith, day7

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jimkeller24 June 29 2009, 11:12:59 UTC
Honestly, I have no idea where you're going with this story, but it is well-written and I'm really looking forward to read more of it.

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yaboiksar June 29 2009, 11:54:53 UTC
That sounds perfect considering I have no idea where I'm going with this either. I just had this thought one day while watching a season 7 episode that, what if Michelle lived but the blast from the car blinded her? So I went with it.

I think I'll work in how he found her and then what they are doing now. Of course Tony won't take what they did laying down. Just like in season 7.

Thanks for reading man!

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toothfairy00 June 29 2009, 14:11:37 UTC
Oooh I'm intrigued. Which means I love it already. :)

I like how you're telling the story from Monica's perspective. I like how you portrayed her empty life and how she gets a small thrill spying on the people that come in and out of the diner.

I LOVE how you described the couple. His paranoia when he entered and his immediately gentle demeanor when she's around can only mean one thing: Tony Almeida. I would've gotten that even if you hadn't mentioned the pairing. :) Michelle being blind is such an interesting premise and I really can't wait to see where it goes. You have me stumped once again - congratulations, woman!

Update soon? :)

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yaboiksar June 29 2009, 17:16:07 UTC
*blush*

Thank you so much!

This was different for me and I actually enjoyed doing it. I hope to get these out quicker than other *normal* chapters but it all depends on how all my work goes. My life has become busier in the past few months.

And of course I have to figure out where I'm going with it, lol.

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bookworm0503 July 2 2009, 01:17:53 UTC
I always think it's neat to see T/M from another person's perspective, especially with s7 Tony and Michelle being in the state she's in. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

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yaboiksar July 2 2009, 01:32:50 UTC
That makes two of us b/c I have no frakin' clue, LOL.

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