Dialogue: Osa & Saeko

[y_n_k]

So when I found at the ocean at midnight, with moonlight and love, it inspired this piece for Takarazuka. Definitely going to sleep now

Comments

[breakism]

/hands joo a rose

I loved it.

[y_n_k]

Aww! *takes rose and LOVES*

Glad you liked it~

[rien_ne_va_plus]

This was sweet and sad...

[y_n_k]

I'm glad that those emotions came out to you. Thanks for taking the time to comment~

[windstar127]

this is wonderful. i really like the emotions that are being conveyed.

[y_n_k]

Thanks~ It's really a relief to hear that; dialogue is definitely not my strong suit so I'm glad emotion came through.

*hugs sad!Osa*

[skye_fall]

Love it! Osa seems almost... fragile, describing Asako. It's like she's already thought long and hard about how it would be to play opposite her in the role. Also:

About Asako’s Elisabeth, I mean.
This, as well as the dialogue leading to it, I find incredibly sweet, because it's obvious that she's not just talking about her as Elisabeth. ♥

my Elisabeth…
Your Elisabeth.
Those two lines... it's so obvious how Osa must feel, hearing someone call Asako their Elisabeth, and even in those simple words, there's a huge amount of emotion being conveyed (at least... in my mind there is xD).

[y_n_k]

Osa seems almost... fragile, describing Asako. It's like she's already thought long and hard about how it would be to play opposite her in the role.
I <3 you for this. Our telepathy is working <333

I'm glad it was obvious to you how she was feeling. The whole thing kinda spawned off of those two lines (My Elisabeth // Your Elisabeth), actually.

[dybji]

Oh wow.
It was touching and understated and poor lonely Osa and poor independent Asako and, for that matter, poor oblivious Saeko.

My favorite part was definitely:
If she had been your Elisabeth, how do you think it would have played out?

Awkwardly…?

Oh, that makes me very hopeful.

I didn’t mean it like that. It’s just - never mind.
I'm a sucker for tragicomic moments, and this was a great one. <3

Actually, would it be okay if I friended this journal? I think there is significant danger of my missing updates otherwise, and I am starting to think that would be a great loss.

[y_n_k]

It was touching and understated and poor lonely Osa and poor independent Asako and, for that matter, poor oblivious Saeko.
You get <3 points too~

I'm really glad you liked that part ^__^ That part and the ending were my favorites to write.

Actually, would it be okay if I friended this journal?
Of course!

[dybji]

Thank you! <3