Comments | xxtsubasaxx: Maybe...just maybe part 2

xxtsubasaxx

Maybe...just maybe part 2

Nov 03, 2008 17:08

Title-maybe...just maybe
pairing- SuzakuXLelouch
rating-pg-pg13
author-xxtsubasaxx

I want to see you, I want to see you
Only this thought overwhelms me
I want to see you right now
We learned to love each other too late, didn't we?
I walk down the road without you

( Maybe…just maybe by calling his name he’ll just turn up…like nothing had happened…like everything that is happening to me is just a dream…maybe by calling for him he’ll wake me up and be sat by my bed stroking my hair…and I’ll still be in ashford academy; it would still be four years ago…well that is all I can wish for… )

Comments 15

funny08 November 3 2008, 19:49:11 UTC

That was beautiful loved it
now I have tears in my eyes
great job ^^

xxtsubasaxx November 3 2008, 19:56:30 UTC

thaaank yuuu

Im so stoopid > . <; i cried while writing it aha xD

xxx

recodes November 5 2008, 08:29:18 UTC

OOOHHHH YAAAYYYYY!!!!!!!! You actually DID make use of that bit of lyric that I translated :3 Do you know how much I love you nao??

xxtsubasaxx November 5 2008, 12:26:34 UTC

hahaha xD

thanks :D:D Thanks for translating it otherwise this fic wudnt av been made ahahah xD

aha xD yay Loved :D:D

I love you and your fics :D:D:D

continue soon ne??
:)

xxx

tailor3141 November 8 2008, 19:42:52 UTC

aww so sad T^T it made me start to cry *hugs suza* awww you poor thing
thank you for this <3 it was so well written!! (and i only say one typo, a you're was supposed to be your)
thanks again!!

xxtsubasaxx November 9 2008, 15:19:48 UTC

aha xD

my english is so bad > . <
LOL

and aawww thank you for reading it :D

tbh i cried when i was writing this =[ LOL XD i love suzalulu and it's sad how Suzaku was the one who had to kill him
=[

thank agen :D

xxxxx

tailor3141 November 9 2008, 17:50:41 UTC

nooonooo i wasn't saying you had bad english ^^ that's very good
I just pointed it out because you said comments to learn how to improve (I was trying to help haha)
you're welcome ^^
ahh yess it was so sad >.< poor suza T^T

xxtsubasaxx November 9 2008, 21:15:24 UTC

aha i knoooow
:)

didn mean to make it sound like i was mad at yuuu aha xD

thanks for helping :):)

Hope yu enjoy the rest of my fanfics :)

xxxx

ookami_fuu November 9 2008, 00:43:38 UTC

It was beautifully written, love the angst atmosphere, and the way you wrote Suzaku, the guilt and loneliness he felt after taking Lelouch away with his own hands (I refuse to say k***ing...)... baka Suzaku! >___<;; Never, thinking about how Lelouch feels!!

One typo that I can spot right away (the rest I might've missed since I can't really read that well through my tears blurred eyes...umm... yes, it was quite hard to read when I'm currently bawling my eyes out...), mainly the 'vein' is supposed to be 'vain'.

xxtsubasaxx November 9 2008, 15:24:29 UTC

awwwwww
yur comment makes me wanna glomp yu XD
aha xD
aaawww
I feel the same, i wish there could av been another way for peace to have been made withou seperating Suzaku and Lelouch =[

*sigh* my english is atrocioys...forgive me xDxD

thanks for reading :D

I av a nu fic comin :D it's called 20 letters from you hope you'll like :)

xxxx

kamshaticum November 9 2008, 02:55:58 UTC

*swallows tears*

That was excruciatingly beautiful. I liked your use of 'him'.

The ending...I'm feeling very depressed now (but in a good way - if that's possible)

xxtsubasaxx November 9 2008, 15:26:24 UTC

aaawwww thank yooou :D

*hands tissue*

I get yuuuu; but yeh i made myself depressd by readin it =_=

im uploading a fluff fic soon and another angst so hope you like :D

and thanks for reading :D

xxxx