Maybe...just maybe part 2

Nov 03, 2008 17:08


Title-maybe...just maybe
pairing- SuzakuXLelouch
rating-pg-pg13
author-xxtsubasaxx

I want to see you, I want to see you
Only this thought overwhelms me
I want to see you right now
We learned to love each other too late, didn't we?
I walk down the road without you

Maybe…just maybe by calling his name he’ll just turn up…like nothing had happened…like everything that is happening to me is just a dream…maybe by calling for him he’ll wake me up and be sat by my bed stroking my hair…and I’ll still be in ashford academy; it would still be four years ago…well that is all I can wish for… )

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kei_natsu November 12 2008, 09:41:48 UTC
So... ethereally beautiful... Thank you thankyou thankyou for writing this...

It's not just that Suzaku is so... so angsty, and then I think I'm gonna be DEAD when Lelouch's voice is saying, "Suzaku what're you doing?" and Lelouch knew Suzaku will call him once upon a time in the future, and then Suzaku, after four years...

...four long years...

...four desperating years...

...called Lelouch's name....

...and Lelouch came, as he promised...

And so... wuuuuhhhh.... dear, expect unnoticeable grammatical errors, and here and there perhaps, adding more poetic words... it is perfect.

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xxtsubasaxx November 12 2008, 09:51:04 UTC
aaawwwwwww

:')

this comment made me like.. erm...

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SMILE LOADS :D

thank you for the lovely comment :)

and thanks for reading :D

xxxxx

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tsukikotokoyami October 9 2009, 00:49:36 UTC
WWWWAAAAAHHHHHH
Why do I just love seeing Suzaku suffer while I cried??? TT^TT
You did a good job *sob*
I really like how you did not allow Suzaku call Lelouch's name until the very ended. Please continue to write TT^TT. I need to wash my face.

Tsukiko Tokoyami

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