A snippet dose for my addiction to this lovely story. I'm glad to see this is 40 chapters. I love long stories where the protagonists go through struggle to get to their ultimate goal. I hate that Zack is in pain, but hopefully it's all worth it in the end. I'm not going to yell at Rian for being blind, because I don't think he is. Zack has always acted that way around Rian, so of course he sees it as a best friend thing. It's like me and my guy best friend. People think we're flirting (or dating), but we just act silly and be ourselves around each other. We kind of act like Zack and Rian. We don't like each other like that. It's just the way we act. If we were to like each other, then I wouldn't see it because we're already close. That's why I feel like Rian is not blind. Though I am mad he didn't read the letter, which I feel will play an important part in the future.
sweet mother of jesus this is amazing. you should write a legitimate book someday. this is actually really fucking amazing. i just. i don't know I would read this if it was a real book or somehthing like it it kind of reminds me of the charlie bone books if you ever read those but i love this so much omg
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I like this story :)
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I love this story though and I can't wait for another chapter. :)
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I'm not going to yell at Rian for being blind, because I don't think he is. Zack has always acted that way around Rian, so of course he sees it as a best friend thing. It's like me and my guy best friend. People think we're flirting (or dating), but we just act silly and be ourselves around each other. We kind of act like Zack and Rian. We don't like each other like that. It's just the way we act. If we were to like each other, then I wouldn't see it because we're already close. That's why I feel like Rian is not blind. Though I am mad he didn't read the letter, which I feel will play an important part in the future.
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you should write a legitimate book someday.
this is actually really fucking amazing.
i just. i don't know I would read this if it was a real book
or somehthing like it
it kind of reminds me of the charlie bone books if you ever read those but i love this so much omg
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