Between the Lines [Hetalia; eventual America/England, 3/4]

[xtwilightzx]

Title: Between the Lines
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Character/Pairings: eventual America/England; Canada, France
Word Count: 4874 words for this chapter
Warning/Spoilers: PG. Use of human names, obnoxious emails/messages and some language.
Summary: Sparked by a comment from Francis and prompted by how current world events have strained his and

Comments

[buddha_loves_me]

sdlghasdga; oh my god, Matthew has completely and utterly won my heart. Aaah, I love the relationship between brothers. It's so sweet, and you do such a good job capturing their caring for each other, and Matthew's eternal long-suffering ha ha.

Oh my god, I cannot wait for the next part! thank you much for sharing this! :D

[xtwilightzx]

♥ I'm so glad you like Matt; I'm irrationally fond of him and I really wanted to bring out his side of the story. Everyone gets so caught up in the drama that is Arthur and Alfred, and there's Matt, just rolling his eyes and enduring their eternal dance around each other.

Thank you so much for your very lovely comment~ ♥

[xtwilightzx]

That is the exact image of Arthur that sparked off this story; I wanted him to be strong and painfully rational as oppose to being overwrought as he's often portrayed when it comes to his feelings to Alfred, so I'm really glad that that came through to you.

Word to that. Thank goodness Matt has the patience of a saint.

*♥s your comment *

[closeincline]

sdlkkghsdfg so wonderful I can't wait to see what happens next GO ALFRED GO~

Mathew is the only reason anything good ever happens, I love him.

[xtwilightzx]

I'm really loving all the love Matthew's getting ♥

I hope the last chapter lives up to your expectations!

[closeincline]

Oh, don't worry, I know that no matter what I will be happy. You do such a good job! I really like the way that you use not just spoken conversations buts text, email, etc. I think it helps make it seem more realistic because that's what a lot of modern communication is. And you did it well. Just thought I would mention, since I didn't before.

Mathew is always under appreciated.

[xtwilightzx]

Thanks for letting me know - it helps to know what worked with people, and I wasn't sure how everyone would take all the emails and texts and things. I really enjoyed writing them, especially those text messages, so I'm glad they work for you =)

He is, unfortunately. But he does know when to smack sense into others when he needs to.

[prestidigital]

I read this all in one go on a whim and I'm very glad that I did, its marvelous! I love your Canada and all your little details (the black magic house thing made me chuckle). I'm glad they're going to work it out now because I was a little worried they weren't going to get it for a minute there.
Its fabulous I can't wait for the last part!

[xtwilightzx]

Eee, I'm glad someone caught Francis's little comment about Arthur's house of black magic!

I'm sure Matt felt the same way you did. They really would have passed each other by, Arthur and Alfred; they're rather set in their own mindsets and it takes quite a bit to make them think otherwise, which was why Matt, who usually watches and doesn't interfere, finally took action.

Thank you for reading~ I do hope you'll enjoy the last chapter!

[chiisana00]

UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!! Q_____Q

[xtwilightzx]

^^~ It's coming soon, I promise!