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citrinesunset July 19 2010, 23:36:36 UTC
I like this. It's a cliche scenario done well. I like that it's a little gritty without being over-the-top, but isn't overly sanitized, either.

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xtricks July 19 2010, 23:57:57 UTC
Yeah. I didn't watn to go too much into exactly how miserable it is to be a street walker but I'm not actually into the whole fantasy that every prostitute's life is like a high-priced call girl in a movie.

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beesandbrews July 19 2010, 23:46:41 UTC
That actually worked. I'm not keen on AU, but you got the characters right, and the scenario as hot, despite the grimy setting.

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xtricks July 19 2010, 23:58:15 UTC
Thanks!

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neifile7 July 20 2010, 00:02:55 UTC
Oh wow. Loved this -- it's a scenario I really, really like seeing done with care, a nice balance between the gritty realism and the pronish fantasy, nothing cliché about it in this rendition. A well-turned trick indeed, Master XT.

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xtricks July 20 2010, 03:20:12 UTC
Thank you! Considering my journal sub-title and my name, I should really write more hooker porn!

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avoidetc October 11 2010, 20:46:36 UTC
That was very nicely done! I really like the mood you set and which carry all the way through.

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xtricks October 11 2010, 21:24:58 UTC
Thank you!

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electrictoes October 12 2010, 14:08:39 UTC
Whoa. Hot. And brilliant.

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