Wow, awesome update on this fic! I love how things spun out of control so quickly, very angsty! I would've yelled at Lana and Lex, like hello, I'm pregnant, stop treating me like I'm public enemy #1.
But Lois' reaction? Very Lois-like! "You got my cousin pregnant?!" LOL This scene could've came straight out of a Smallville episode, everyone seemed very incharacter to me. Great job!! Can't wait for the next update.
This just keeps getting better and better. I could tell by your writing that Lana wasn't going to take this well. But is Clark going to pretend to be the daddy? You definitely have me riveted.
With any luck I'll have the next part up tonight. I wrote the first scene of the next chapter before I went to bed last night. Your questions will be answered soon. ;D
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But Lois' reaction? Very Lois-like! "You got my cousin pregnant?!" LOL This scene could've came straight out of a Smallville episode, everyone seemed very incharacter to me. Great job!! Can't wait for the next update.
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