This was originally so much shorter. Okay, originally, originally, it was completely different. It was originally set much later and under different circumstance, but since I elected to pretend Tristan’s death did not happen, I had to rework it. Then I posted the rework and it was more of a little snippet than anything else and didn't really ( Read more... )

December 10th, 2014

Kaitlynn Winston could be a messy drunk. It wasn’t one of her finer personality traits, but she dealt with it by only having a glass of wine periodically, and only really getting drunk once a year. She stayed away from the apartment on these nights. There was an unspoken agreement that she would return the next night, and any ( Read more... )

2007

"New haircut--what do you think?" Adam carded his fingers through his hair and shook it out with pride. Adam's typical shag was replaced with a neater look, shaved on the sides, the loose curls concentrated toward the top of his skull. It spilled over his forehead, and Adam shook his head again to free his vision.

"You look like a douchebag," ( Read more... )

Some mornings, when the air was crisp and the skies were crystal clear, Kaitlynn would look up and see constellations as bright as though some astral being had brought them to her. If she were still in Rochester, they'd have to drive an hour into the country just to find skies this clear. They used to do that, in the summers late at night, piling ( Read more... )

Adam was trying to be an adult about this.

Was he though? Did being an adult mean that as long as his sister was happy, he would be better off keeping his mouth shut? As far as he could tell, she was happy. Well, happier. As happy as one can be surviving on a non-consecutive four hours of sleep a night. But that wasn’t related to the situation at ( Read more... )

This is commanderkari 's writing journal.
This is where most of my whole stories, chapters, and tidbits go.
Everything's categorized with certain tags, so if you want to read from a specific story/chapter, or read something featuring a specific character or place, just click the link at the top of the page titled "tags."

Otherwise, if you generally just want to ( Read more... )

March 5th, 2015

"Are you listening to me?" Kaitlynn demanded, waving a hand in front of Adam's face before resting her elbow on the counter in front of her, hand outstretched. "I need more sugar."

Adam dragged his gaze over to her and shook his head. "No, you're cut off." Tristan lightly patted her hand in silent agreement until she brought it ( Read more... )

bold flaws your character has / italicise ones they used to have, or have partially. feel free to add more.

Kaitlynn
absent-minded / abusive / addicted / aimless / alcoholic / aloof / anxious / arrogant / audacious / has bad habits / bigmouthed / bigoted / blunt / bold / callous / childish / cruel / cursed / dependent /dishonest / disloyal / ( Read more... )

I should be asleep right now. wtf.

Fourteen
“Kaitlynn Marie Winston, in god’s name-what have you done to your face?”

Kaitlynn dropped her backpack on the floor by the front door and gazed despairingly up at the dry-erase calendar that hung above it. Their parents weren’t supposed to be home until tomorrow.

In an instant her mother was in ( Read more... )

Why am I so, so against re-reading and editing things? Jfc

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Tactical ErrorPascal was starting to think that this party was a waste of his time. No. He started out thinking this part was a waste of his time. Fresh out of school and six months into this job, he had successfully dodge every single office party so far. This time, however, his ( Read more... )