You'll Never Have Another Chance {Zelo/Ren - NC-17}

[xsharetheworld]

Title: You'll Never Have Another Chance
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Zelo/Ren + Zico (BAP/Nu'est/Block B)
Warning: Implied rape + Underage
Type: One Shot
W/C: 9145
Summary: Prequel to Cherry Tomatoes from Sunny Hill, Simple Kind of Therapy & This New Kind of Feeling.

Comments

[plenty8]

but my question is... WHY WAS POOR BABY JELLO IN ZICO'S APARTMENT IN THE FIRST PLACE?? D: *sobs* I'm dying to know!

god, i have so many feels for this series. perfect and ARGH YOU WROTE MORE YAY!

never thought about the Ren/Zelo couple but i must say it's pretty kewt. though i see Ren topping more because of his personality.. but i suppose he was the dominant one psychologically anyways lol. for some reason i can't see Zelo topping anything.. except, perhaps, a cherry tomato. OTL. /shot.

laved ittt <3

[xsharetheworld]

XDD IT'S ONE OF THOSE THINGS I JUST DON'T WANT TO THINK ABOUT LOLOL OTL /is a l0ser

OMFGFSIJFKAHJBFAKB

[cosmoqueen2900]

You know I really do love your fics soooooooo much. The story, the dialog, everything is perfect!! But there's one little thing that bothers me if you don't mind me mentioning and that's the lack of space between paragraphs. It looks a bit cluttered and it makes it so difficult to read and kinda hurts my eyes.

[xsharetheworld]

Why thank you! ^^ I appreciate that a lot you know? :3 And lol omfg in notepad there's a shitton of spacing but when I copy and paste into livejournal it takes them all out and I frowny face at it and get too lazy to correct it all after 6-7 hours of straight typing cause I type my fics in one day. OTL I'm sorry about that and I'll make sure to space it if I ever write more. XD <33

[cosmoqueen2900]

Hmmm yeah notepad is sucky like that. Maybe try Microsoft Word or Wordpad! And wow you type it all in one day? Damn, how do you do it? lol

[xsharetheworld]

I wish but I have an imac that doesn't have anything but TextEdit which is the same as notepad but for an apple xD And I have to type it all in one day because if I sleep or stop typing, it never gets finished the next day because I'll either forget or I won't have motivation anymore lol So when I type, I take my whole day to do it. :3

[sillykilljoys]

you don't understand. This is like the only renlo fic to like exist and I'm crying because it's over ajlfalkdkdslf It's like my deep dark wedged up in the back of my closet otp and I CAN'T I mean. It could have gone a million different ways, but this was sweet. I wish I could read what comes after but it's just going to upset me (I'm not the hugest fan of banglo..) And even though you feel like ren's character stepped out of his normal characterization, I think it worked out.. I wish people did this cross over more often. It's really hot.

[xsharetheworld]

Yeah I didn't make Ren a huge bitch in this but I kind of think this is how I picture him in some ways? >< I ship RenLo so hard, it's ridiculous. I had to write a fic about it. :c And people *cough*maybethreatenedmeintoitbecausethiswaswrittenveryveryverylast*cough* ^^;; I'm glad you liked it though, if you did? <3

[sillykilljoys]

I don't see him as a terrible person? I don't know if he's all that cold either. He's pretty kawaii desu. If maybe a litle tsundere at times. I think he's just a little shy tbh. But I love renlo. AND NO ONE WRITES IT SO THANK YOU ; U ;

[xsharetheworld]

He's usually really cold and mean towards his members but I assume they tease him a lot and cause he's the youngest at 17. >< He is shy, just like Zelo X3 <33 YOU'RE SO VERY WELCOME, IT WAS MY PLEASURE ;A;