awww :c this saddens me but then its also left off at a good spot so im oddly okay with you not writing more? but if you ever feel the urge to add on i strongly encourage it >.
I'm not sure if you did either. xD But thank you for commenting now! ^^ I love all of the BAP members so I had to throw a little DaeHyun in there. *~* <33 Thank you so much for reading~ ♥~!!
Wow... just, wow! Right from the episode one, everything just 'BLOW YOUR MIND'. I love how you conveyed Zelo's pain by his quirks and idiosyncrasies, and I love how, despite the obvious wants, Yongguk was more concerned on helping Zelo recover rather than taking advantage of his frailty. The making-love scene was ineffable. Most smuts had me cringing but never the ones in this story. It sounds so ethereal by your words how everything goes on between them, how their relationship blossoms. I just... KJNBDKJBSD ARGHH!
I wrote a Prequel to these and I think that one might have you cringing a little with it's unrealistic type qualities but usually I often pride myself on that being the selling point to my writing; the realistic feel of it. I loved describing Zelo and YongGuk and giving them their own deep set personalities. Thank you so much for commenting, and I really hope my future works, if you read them, are just as amazing to you. >< njsafkikjang I'm blushing! XD
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nfjdsngusiengdjsh das good? :DD
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this saddens me
but then its also left off at a good spot so im oddly okay with you not writing more?
but if you ever feel the urge to add on i strongly encourage it >.
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wow, really good story. I enjoyed it a lot
thank you :3
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Wow... just, wow! Right from the episode one, everything just 'BLOW YOUR MIND'. I love how you conveyed Zelo's pain by his quirks and idiosyncrasies, and I love how, despite the obvious wants, Yongguk was more concerned on helping Zelo recover rather than taking advantage of his frailty. The making-love scene was ineffable. Most smuts had me cringing but never the ones in this story. It sounds so ethereal by your words how everything goes on between them, how their relationship blossoms. I just... KJNBDKJBSD ARGHH!
AWESOME!
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I wrote a Prequel to these and I think that one might have you cringing a little with it's unrealistic type qualities but usually I often pride myself on that being the selling point to my writing; the realistic feel of it. I loved describing Zelo and YongGuk and giving them their own deep set personalities. Thank you so much for commenting, and I really hope my future works, if you read them, are just as amazing to you. >< njsafkikjang I'm blushing! XD
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