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syupeojunieo July 29 2013, 03:40:08 UTC
a/n: alternate title is: why edori should never attempt to write sexing

I hope you're kidding, because this was absolutely amazing.
(this is all i'm capable of rn because it's late but i will be back eventually to give you reasons why<3)

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edoriko August 2 2013, 09:00:15 UTC
haha I'm not kidding bc.... I know next to nothing about Yixing... OTL

but I'm glad you liked it ;u;

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kfangirl4 July 29 2013, 05:52:56 UTC
OMG this was soooo good!! I felt the heat and the sweat and the sweetness of the strawberry milk. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT

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edoriko August 2 2013, 09:00:46 UTC
ahh thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. ^^

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anonymous July 30 2013, 10:21:44 UTC
(And if sometimes the breaths give way to lazy kisses along his nape, and a tongue tracing veins and vertebrae, then that's just also a part of what they do.)

what is this feeling that is suddenly sexing omfg. i really liked the feel of this fic and how it was kind of bildungsroman but also not but also romance but also friendship. idk. good fic that's a mix of good things!! <333

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edoriko August 2 2013, 09:03:16 UTC
tbh I wanted to add a bit more coming-of-ageness to it, but I ended up abandoning that in favour of putting in a bit more romance >w<

it was kind of bildungsroman but also not but also romance but also friendship
why I have trouble writing summaries haha

thanks for reading and commenting!

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yifano July 31 2013, 13:37:36 UTC
scrEAMING THIS IS EVERYTHING GOOD IN ONE FIC!!!!!111!
loved loved loved it sobs write more sexing please <3

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edoriko August 2 2013, 09:05:05 UTC
awww thank you kati ;u;

lol idk maybe someday... but I really don't understand how to write yixing at all ╥﹏╥

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edoriko August 2 2013, 09:08:00 UTC
ikr they're so adorable~ ;w;

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