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edoriko in xoxocamp

weekly challenge one: you make it easy

Jul 29, 2013 10:36

sexing & bff!sekai
pg; ~2.5k
-weekly challenge #1
-cannon

( Yixing looked at Sehun and wondered if he'd make it as an idol, or if he'd become one of the many that burned out and faded before ever getting a chance to glitter. He'd seen many of those and he wondered if Sehun would live up to his hopes or crumble downward. )

author: edoriko, pairing: lay/sehun, length: one-shot, weekly challenge #1, !fanfic, rating: pg

Comments 18

xfragments July 31 2013, 20:51:44 UTC

Omg so precious I love this pairing.

edoriko August 2 2013, 09:10:42 UTC

ahh me too ;u;

thanks for commenting ^^

shirahimejj August 1 2013, 01:06:45 UTC

ah, such cute Sexing~ Loved it! ^___^

I like how Yixing was the one teaching and taking on responsibility, he doesn't get portrayed this way that often. And extra points for including anything with his neck~ XD

edoriko August 2 2013, 09:09:48 UTC

hahaha ofc I had to mention his neck. XD

I'm glad you liked his characterization bc I seriously have so much difficulty writing yixing. =___=

thanks for reading and commenting~

gokulex59 August 16 2013, 20:29:40 UTC

Why wouldn't you attempt to write sexing I mean this is an amazing sexing I think I just clawed my forearms because fucking sexing - the title says it all.

If there was one thing I was disappointed with, it's that why no make-out scenes. Why.

edoriko August 17 2013, 09:02:59 UTC

Lol okay fine here's a small make-out epilogue ( ... )

gokulex59 August 17 2013, 10:29:12 UTC

Not bad... Not bad at all.

*satisfied*

edoriko August 17 2013, 13:04:20 UTC

lol glad I could make you happy.

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