Positive (Chapter 9)

[xojemmaxo]

Title: Positive
Author: xojemmaxo
Rating: NC-17, but not this chapter. The next one, perhaps.
Pairing: RyWalk, side Brencer and Frerard.
POV: Third
Summary: Spencer, who had helped Jon up from the floor, insisted that Ryan cheated, to which Ryan retorted, "Shut up, I'm pregnant, I'm allowed to cheat as much as I want. Another game, Jon?" And Spencer had

Comments

[mix_thevenom]

aww spencer &hearts
this chap &hearts&hearts

[xojemmaxo]

aww thanks!

[bemyparamore]

I haven't commented before because I'm a weenis, but I really like the way this story is coming along and developing so far. I really like the characterisation of Ryan and Jon, I like how they're polar opposites :)

Also, year 10? Are you Australian? If so woo! Fellow Australian slashers FTW!
(Also its kind of impossible to fail year 10, trust me, I did it last year and i have the worst work ethic ever)

[xojemmaxo]

yay weenises! and your an australian weenis, which just makes you that much awesomer. yeah, i was trying to sort of make everything work against them, you know, even their personalities, but then they get through it in a completely cliche kind of way. probably.

yep, im aussie :D im in victoria, which state are you?
i know! its like, theres a lot of work, but its really simple. just time taxing. it is taking time away from my slash, i am not amused.

thanks muchly for your comment!

[bemyparamore]

I'm in NSW, it's convienient only so i can stalk hayley lol.

you gotta love weenises, the best body part (apart from maybe philanges...)

yeah everybody stresses over year 10 then they sit the exams and realise it's piss-easy. i think the board of studies thinks we're retarded :)

I like that you've given their personalities that much thought, it's so cool when a writer really makes an effort with their characters, and it shows too :)

btw i'm adding you cuz you can never have too many australian slash buddies :)

[xojemmaxo]

haha, lol

philange. philange. it starts to lose it's meaning when you say it over and over. philaaaange.

i should be okay then :D

aw, thanks!

you're right. there should be a club or something for aussie slashers. :D

[motherwar37]

cool story so far. i've read a fuck load of fanfic, like you have no idea. most of it is crap, poorly written, and stupid, but yours is awesome! Finally! a story with substance! lol, can't wait for the next chapter.

[xojemmaxo]

thank you! :D next chapter will be up as soon as i can cure my writer's block.

oh, also, thanks for the friend invite.

and also i love your icon, lol.

and thanks for commenting :D