Title: Positive
Author:
xojemmaxoRating: NC-17
Pairing: RyWalk, possible others
POV: Third
Summary: On his walk to work, Ryan feels a lot like eating coconut sorbet, like he had once on a date with an old boyfriend at a Greek restaurant. He hadn't liked the coconut sorbet then, but he sure as hell wants it now.
Disclaimer: I don't own the Young Veins,
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Ryyyyyyaaaaaan!
You are possibly the stupidest preggo boy EVER!
but btw this took my phone's slash virginity! (aka first fic I read on my phone.)
nice chapter!
looking forward to the next one!
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Thanks!
<3
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Thanks for telling me, I wouldn't have noticed otherwise
<3
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and oh boy - this chapter was so cute!! the ending paragraph was adorableness, seriously. much love.
i now feel like coconut sorbet 6__6
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I'm not actually sure if the last paragraph made sense. It was pretty much one massive sentence, I think, well, if it's legible, that's okay.
Mmm... coconut...
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but ryannnn. stop being stupid about you and your baby's health duder. gah.
but aww, jon is moving in :D
hee <3
oh, and btw this is 555gehenna666. i haz a new acc :D
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He just... doesn't care, which makes him sound like an asshole :/
Jontaimnow.
I like your new account name :)
<3
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yeah =/
jontaimnow? whut?
thanks :)
&hearts
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holy mother of you. this. is. GREAT.
SPAMMING TIME BECAUSE I FEEL LIKE DOING IT:
1. Ryan knows Jon's apologizing for everything. He knows Jon won't do it again, because he's a man of his word and he's also pretty awesome, even though he obviously doesn't know how the fuck to use a condom. I smiled, proud, then laughed. bweheheheheh condom
2. He tells himself it's nothing, though, and kisses Jon goodbye (it's a long goodbye) on his way out the door
and
"You've been reading Gee's comic strips again, haven't you," states Ryan,
and
The smell of the coffee is absolutely disgusting; he doesn't know how he ever drank the stuff. OH YEAH OH YEAH
spencer bden is coming soon?
man, Jemma, I never thought THIS FIC is going to be SO COOL. so, I'M SORRY.
YEASH UPDATE next chapter NOW
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1. He put it on backwards or something, I DON"T KNOW. :P
2. Ryan's gonna be late for work if he keeps doing that *shakes head*
3. I love Frank's... Frankiness.
4. omg me and my friend tried coffee yesterday. It was seriously one of the worst things I've ever tasted. We may have put too much coffee in... (rambling ftw)
and maybe Brencer, if you like that sort of thing. Maybe i should do a poll.
Next update will be... as soon as I actually write the next chapter, lol
Thanks for your spammy comment, Bamby! :DD
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