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Positive (Chapter 2)

Jan 13, 2010 19:45

Title: Positive
Author: xojemmaxo
Pairing: Ryan / Jon
Disclaimer: I don't own The Young Veins or Panic! at the Disco orRyan Ross or Jon Walker. :P
Rating: Nc - 17 in coming chapters
POV Third
Summary: Ryan looks at the little black screen where the black jellybean is suspended in grey fuzz. He feels like he might vomit.
Beta: hooray4irony
Author's Notes: This is ( Read more... )

ryan / jon, mpreg, slash, panic! at the disco, the young veins

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xojemmaxo January 14 2010, 01:04:44 UTC

I know! I wanted a little unwanted mpreg in the world. :)

Thanks for the comment!

what_gaiety January 14 2010, 13:18:57 UTC

im also taking this chance to thank for the speedy update.

The waiting room scene was adorable ^^ loved the chapter.

xojemmaxo January 14 2010, 13:22:24 UTC

:D the next one mightn't be up for a while

I thought so too :)

Thanks for the comment!

onthewindowpane January 16 2010, 00:42:33 UTC

Hey there! I actually really like this! I love the pairing too. And Ryan's sarcasm, but it's a little heart-sore (which isn't a word) coz I love children! And so does Jon! I can't wait to have kids. 'Cept I'm young. But i love this, like honestly! Yay for you! Keep going darling!
<3
I'm going to read the next chapter. ooh I like how the chapters have names!eek!

xojemmaxo January 16 2010, 12:22:32 UTC

Oh, see, I hate children, so it's incredibly easy to write Ryan's views on things. (Not a evil, coldhearted bitch, btw, just... don't like them. And their drool.)

I'm glad you love it! And I'll deifintely keep going.

The naming of the chapters randomly came around when I thought "Ultrasound and the JellyBean" and named chapter 2 that on a whim.
<3 Thanks for the comment!

onthewindowpane January 17 2010, 00:30:13 UTC

Hahaha yeah yeah, I had spent literally of my life hating them, but a few moths ago the evil little fuckers just I don't know converted me or something?
Damn those drool faced bastards!
<3

stupidrhapsody January 16 2010, 04:06:23 UTC

OOOH 3RD POV YEASH, gonna read it soon my man

xojemmaxo January 16 2010, 12:24:04 UTC

As promised :D

Thanks for the comment!

stupidrhapsody January 16 2010, 13:42:19 UTC

so I've read it, and whoa. ryan want to abort the baby? NOOOOO. anyway is this going to be a long fic? can I request the baby be a boy? cos I'm sick it's always a girl. I kinda hate girl lol, this is slash business, should have been full with BOYS lol. hahha

xojemmaxo January 16 2010, 13:48:20 UTC

ehe. Go, Ryan, go!

This will probably be a long fic, yes. I was kinda thinking the baby should be a boy, but I'm not sure, because Jon with a baby girl is just made of win.

stupidrhapsody January 16 2010, 13:55:26 UTC

what? go ryan? lol

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA PLEASE? please? I want a baby boy, this is a sentiment, subjective, request lmao. but you're the writer, dude lol. add me back?

xojemmaxo January 16 2010, 13:58:14 UTC

i kind of pretty much agree with what ryan's feeling, :P

probably gonna be a baby boy :)

I added you back :D

stupidrhapsody January 16 2010, 14:04:46 UTC

oh yeah you added me back lol. whoa, well, jon accidentally broke the condom. who is to blame? lol.

YESH PLEASE