Positive (Chapter 11)

[xojemmaxo]

Title: Positive
Author: xojemmaxo
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ryan/Jon, distant Brencer, Frerard
POV: Third
Summary: Ryan doesn't throw up in the morning before work. No, the morning sickness decides to wake him up at 3:00am in the morning instead.
Disclaimer: I do not own The Young Veins, Panic at The Disco, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, or any of their

Comments

[skullentine]

:D you made my day!
Poor Ryan D: I hope he feels better! and i can't wait to know how far he is!
eeep excited now! :3

[xojemmaxo]

yayy! :DDD
aw, he will. Soon. right now I'm enjoying torturing him. He's actually not that far along, I'll have to start speeding things up ^.^'
Thanks for commenting! :)

[skullentine]

xD torturing is so much fun!
>.> thinks of how far he could be-
x] also i like your mikey pic!

[xojemmaxo]

thanks! when i saw it i was like, that is INCREDIBLE photoshopping! but now im pretty sure its real. :D so yay for crossdressing mikey, even if it was a joke.

[motherwar37]

great chapter, I can't help but wonder what will happen, so awesome.

btw, if you don't mind, i posted a story and i was hoping you could maybe read it over and please tell me your opinion? so far it has no reads. so if you don't mind that would be really awesome.

[xojemmaxo]

:D

I shall :)

thanks for commenting! :D

[stupidrhapsody]

*dances*

unlike your author notes, I felt so freaking domestic reading this chapter. dunno why. maybe because ryan is so submissive here? like, forgetting his ego and lets jon take care of him? because this chapter is NC-17? because of this sentence? Jon refuses at first, but soon gives in to Ryan's awesome powers of seduction, which he totally possesses.

in short. I LIKE this. and definitely, update quick naow cinta. btw. I commented on your entry. dude, are you alright?

[xojemmaxo]

yeah... ryan wont be doing that for long. >:D i'll have to make more chapters NC - 17 then :) ryan definitely possesses them powers of seduction. definitely.

yay! update will be when i actually write the chapter, lol. i'm fine :D

thanks for the comment!

[stupidrhapsody]

MOAR NC-17 YES PLS, if it's alright with the holy plot. anyway glad you're okay because, hey girl don't drink in such a young age. \o/

that's just understandable and I'm going to send you chapter 6 soon. also, here:

[xojemmaxo]

okay then. more NC-17-ness shall be organized :)

Okay, I'll beta it soon :D

also...
AHH I LOVE IT!!!
LOOK AT HIS LITTLE FAAAACE!
AND HIS LITTLE BUUUMMP!
/rant
Thanks so much! :D

[spindlelimbs]

I really like this chapter! Especially the last part *__________*
Jon is so cute omg and I like that Ryan is finally listening to him.

[xojemmaxo]

yay for random porn!
Jon's going to be even cuter soon, if it's possible, but Ryan won't be listening to him (or anyone) for long. :P

Thanks for commenting!

[hooray4irony]

Hey Nugget.
Go on msn, bitch. I want to speak to you but you wont answer my email.
:P
<3 Vonny ^.^