Positive (Chapter 11)

[xojemmaxo]

Title: Positive
Author: xojemmaxo
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ryan/Jon, distant Brencer, Frerard
POV: Third
Summary: Ryan doesn't throw up in the morning before work. No, the morning sickness decides to wake him up at 3:00am in the morning instead.
Disclaimer: I do not own The Young Veins, Panic at The Disco, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, or any of their

Comments

[stupidrhapsody]

*dances*

unlike your author notes, I felt so freaking domestic reading this chapter. dunno why. maybe because ryan is so submissive here? like, forgetting his ego and lets jon take care of him? because this chapter is NC-17? because of this sentence? Jon refuses at first, but soon gives in to Ryan's awesome powers of seduction, which he totally possesses.

in short. I LIKE this. and definitely, update quick naow cinta. btw. I commented on your entry. dude, are you alright?

[xojemmaxo]

yeah... ryan wont be doing that for long. >:D i'll have to make more chapters NC - 17 then :) ryan definitely possesses them powers of seduction. definitely.

yay! update will be when i actually write the chapter, lol. i'm fine :D

thanks for the comment!

[stupidrhapsody]

MOAR NC-17 YES PLS, if it's alright with the holy plot. anyway glad you're okay because, hey girl don't drink in such a young age. \o/

that's just understandable and I'm going to send you chapter 6 soon. also, here:

[xojemmaxo]

okay then. more NC-17-ness shall be organized :)

Okay, I'll beta it soon :D

also...
AHH I LOVE IT!!!
LOOK AT HIS LITTLE FAAAACE!
AND HIS LITTLE BUUUMMP!
/rant
Thanks so much! :D

[stupidrhapsody]

because your NC-17 isn't explicit, but HOT. can you imagine that? not explicit, not long, but hot. that's better than a long, explicit NC-17.

yep I've sent it n.n

THANK YOU. that wasn't my best cos I don't have scanner. but I'm planning to draw more. with JONNNNNNNN

[xojemmaxo]

Aw, really? Thank you! I feel that writing long, explicit NC-17 sort of... take away the feeling of it? Yeah. It sort of just feels like actions when that happens. :P

Okay, betaing it as i type.

That's okay! Yay Jon!

[stupidrhapsody]

I kind of agree with you, but sometimes, long explicit nc-17 is HOT lol. but you, my cinta, you definitely hot by writing it in short sentences. don't worry.

YEASH

I'll try my man, I'll try n.n