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[fic; 30emo] Sadame no Ito :: Snapping Threads

Feb 02, 2008 02:54

Title: Sadame no Ito :: Snapping Threads
Chapter: #8 of The Long Chain Cycle
Author: Cross (xmachina_writes)
Band/Pairing: DBSK, w-inds, alicenine., LM.C. - implied RyuichixKeita, past AijixChangmin, implied ToraxHiroto
30emotions Prompt: #30: Wrath
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: injudicous flailing of the angst mallet?
Word Count: 4314
Summary: When a private affair becomes semi ( Read more... )

30emotions, sadame no ito, long chain, aijimin

Comments 15

chloe1910 February 2 2008, 14:47:21 UTC

OMG! so Min did sleep with jae..I would have never expect Min to be sleeping with so many of his *ahem* friends...

Ex machina, Yunho and Jae is not together here right? Does Yunho have any feeling for Jae? Or does Jae has any feeling for Min? Jae and Min was just together for sex?? Min doesn't want to risk their friendship, that's why he started to er, sleep with the others? I'm confused!! Can explain?

xmachina_writes February 2 2008, 23:32:26 UTC

Well, he is a teenaged guy. XD

I should just say 'read the fic again, it's all there' ... but I'm feeling nice or something. XD So yes, there is no JaeHo right now, though they both have feelings for each other. Yunho's been pushing Jae away for the sake of not endangering the group. Jae loves Min, but it's the love of a dear friend, not the same as his feelings for Yunho. And Min knows it, so some of the finding others is not wanting to risk ruining things with Jae and the band as a whole, some of it is wanting to stop feeling like he's taking advantage of Jae.

chloe1910 February 3 2008, 07:08:14 UTC

hehe..thanks for the explaination...hehehehehe....

Poor Min..I hope he'll work things out with the group though..I wouldn't want him to leave the group..they belonged together....

I hope to see some Jaeho in future though...

shinchul303 February 2 2008, 15:42:45 UTC

Really good chapter. So adult. Real issues. Can't wait for more!

xmachina_writes February 2 2008, 23:37:33 UTC

Thank you. Yeah, the muses dug in and decided they needed to tackle some heavy shit, so I'm glad it's being received okay. Was kinda worried about that. ^^

dark_flare54 February 2 2008, 20:32:44 UTC

Ohhh exciting! I can't wait to read what's going to happen next! *Waits impatiently for next segment*

xmachina_writes February 2 2008, 23:38:44 UTC

Maybe if people beg a lot I'll post the next fic sooner rather than later? XD I'm a little hesitant because it really does take me forever to finish things and I've only got a three-fic cushion left now. And having that small a margin, especially when I already know the fic I'm working on right now is going to be on the long side, makes me uneasy.

kenaressa February 2 2008, 20:44:22 UTC

The plot thickens! Everyone's reactions seem more than a little extreme, and highly judgmental. How did management find out about it anyway?

xmachina_writes February 2 2008, 23:42:00 UTC

Yeah, and yet at the same time...stressed out teenagers aren't known for being very rational.

Avex are the ones flipping out, way more than SM. Both were informed via Pony Canyon, but I'm not sure how PC found out.

kenaressa February 3 2008, 01:03:58 UTC

*sighs* too true, but I have the feeling that this irrationality is going to bite them all in the butt.

But why are they flipping out so totally? If PC told them, then they didn't find out through gossip mags...plus it's over already, so it won't BE in the gossip mags.... I really don't see the huge issue there.

xmachina_writes February 5 2008, 17:07:36 UTC

Avex has a pattern for going overboard over the stupidest shit.

Okay, so it's plot contrivance.

Um, I'd say more, but it'd spoil the plot. >_>

theresa_lynne February 3 2008, 01:45:17 UTC

Poor Min. It's true that being famous has such consequences, though. D: