P5: Full House

[xiukisses]

Title: Full House
For: P5
Pairing: Minseok/Sehun/Lu Han/Junmyun
Rating: PG-13
Length: 6014w
Summary: Besides his many major insecurities and overwhelming doubts, Sehun thinks he’s got this four-way, polyamorous relationship-thing in the bag.
Warnings: Fluff :’), Mentions of sexual activity
Author's note: I absolutely fell in love with this prompt

Comments

[xiukisses]

this was actually my prompt (/ u \) i will return and leave you a comment after i finish up classes and coursework for the day!!! <33

[xiukisses]

Okay, first of all! Sehun's friendship with Jongin is just so ;u; I really adore how Jongin is totally cool listening to Sehun and understanding and I just >///<

He remembers his boyfriends’ reassurances, their advice, when they first asked him to be a part of their relationship. “I’m just going to take it one day at a time.”

IM SCREECHING I LOVE THIS AND THEN JONGIN OMG “Did you just say one dick at a time?” Jongin, PLEASE.

oh my gosh seHO MAKING OUT IN THE LIVING ROOM IM SO and then i really love lu han in this entire fic. he's just so --

i love all of the little moments that you snuck in ;~; this is such a lovely fic

“Ha.” He grabs the underside of Sehun’s chair, who’s sitting next to him, and pulls him closer to him, scraping loudly against the wooden floor. “Why would we be jealous of what’s ours?” There’s a mischievous gleam in his eyes as he smirks and leans forward to kiss Sehun.

IM SQUEALING THIS IS SO CUTE

He’s touchy, clingy, oftentimes finding his mouth pressed against his skin and acting innocent. “How did my

[zhgyi]

Tbh, when I thought of "one dick at a time" I thought I was really funny and HAD to slip that in there lololol silly me. silly Jongin.

Did you know that Lu Han here is me, therefore you love me?
LOL

omgomgomg I really wanted the Xiuhun to be meaningful but I didn't want to overplay it so I thought I'd subtly mention "Minseok is so important". I was afraid I'd steered away from the main pairing, but this is how they are to me. Was the scene lacking? :ccccc

OtheRWISE I WAS REALLY HAPPY TO READ THROUGH YOUR SQUEALING, JENN ONGNDHSJD I'M SO GLad you liked this. Your prompt was A+++ ;U; Keep it forever. <3

[fairyminseok]

EUQWAU HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

OK+AY SO WHEN I SAW THE PAIRINGS I MAY OR MAY NOT HAVE LITERALLY MADE AN INHUMAN NOISE
AND I CONTINUED TO MAKE SAID INHUMAN NOISES THROUGHOUT THIS FIC.

oh my gosh??? Where do I begin??
The way you placed them each in this relationship -- with each other roles and separate relationships coming together and how important each one was for Sehun and for all of them was beautiful.

The way you wrote each of them -- you have such a good judge of character I believe and I'm obsessed with the little bit about Lu Han and his need for affection. Seriously I'm ;;;;
and all the little cute bits and Sehun talking to Jongin and Jongin being totally cool with this.

The humour was so great and the little loving scenes. And the bits about Sehun's insecurities; his feelings of not knowing where he fits and being re assured in the best ways that he does fit and he's important and loved by each of them together and alone.

This was wonderful and one of the best poly representations I've seen
thank you;;;

[zhgyi]

Inhuman noise LOL

It's something I was really stuggling with. To show how each of Sehun's boyfriends are important to him - none more or less than the other and I'm just glad it was good enough for you to comment on it ;u;

I'm glad you liked everyone and the theme. Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment♡♡♡♡♡

[jinwann]

i loved how sehun spends time with each one in their own unique ways, and then there is spending time as a whole of the group in a different way than all their individual dates combined ;3; it's a sweet added complexity to the relationship and it helps resolve sehun's feelings so well ;;;;;;; <3
also i am very into this OT4 now i didnt realize how badly i needed it until this fic
also also jongin's lines were awesome i loved his friendship w sehun xD <3

[zhgyi]

Waaah I'm so glad the resolution pleased you. I was so worried. My friend proofread and told me it was kind of lame but I thought "That's just them." They're not over-the-top or anything...I'm rambling a little bit lololol

I'll be honest, I didn't know I needed poly either xD Omh Jongin is so popular for such small appearances but I'm happy. xD

Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment!♡♡♡♡

[teatimetaemint]

I didn't know if I would, but I really really loved it

[zhgyi]

I'm really, really, really glad you gave this a chance! ^o^ And I'm really happy with all the flailing and gushing LOL Ohohoh I'm so glad this literally caught your attention. ^^ mdmdhdhske Ah...jeez, I'm blushing I'm so flattered >///< I'm so glad you fell in love along the way. That's what I was hoping for since I started writing ;U;

THANK YOU SO MUCH for reading and leaving a comment♡♡♡

[naegastar]

Ahhhhhh I really enjoyed this ;w; I like how you showed Sehun with each of them and then when he finally realizes that he does fit it's in a scene with all of them. Their dynamic felt so accurate and then...the mug...so so cute.

[zhgyi]

lololol I'm glad you enjoyed the mug. I was told it was lame buT TO ME - TO THEM, THE FOUR OF THEM - It felt right. ahahah

THANK YOU SO MUCH for reading. I'm so glad you liked it. ^^