P5: Full House

Sep 01, 2015 08:47

Title: Full House
For: P5
Pairing: Minseok/Sehun/Lu Han/Junmyun
Rating: PG-13
Length: 6014w
Summary: Besides his many major insecurities and overwhelming doubts, Sehun thinks he’s got this four-way, polyamorous relationship-thing in the bag.
Warnings: Fluff :’), Mentions of sexual activity
Author's note: I absolutely fell in love with this prompt ( Read more... )

#round 1, with: joonmyun, ot3+, rating: pg-13, with: lu han

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e2x2o September 3 2015, 06:47:50 UTC
This... This is absolutely beautiful! Everything in it is beautiful! The way they each have different personalities yet they fit so perfectly together and balance it out. The honesty between them all because honesty is a very important factor in a poly relationship. Their kisses and small gestures. The way Sehun notices everything so well oh my god! The way they reassure each other and the way they tease each other. The way Sehun spends time individually with them yet absolutely loves the times where they're all together. I really really loved this fic because you showed me such a beautiful side to this relationship. The emotional bond and the character discrcription. This is now one of my fav poly fics! I loved it from the beginning to the end! Now I feel all warm and nice and wow this was so cute and beautiful and great job!!!!

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zhgyi September 27 2015, 05:00:33 UTC
EEEEPPP WOW YOU FLATTER ME. thank you so much! For your comment and fore reading.♡♡♡♡♡ I'm so relieved this appealed to you ^^

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whiskerd September 3 2015, 08:02:46 UTC
This was an ultra cute fic ♥

The way you wrote their interactions with one another was lovely to read haha Luhan's character was A++++ so was Jongin's A+++ The dynamic of their relationship was interesting to read and I look forward to reading more of your works (:

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zhgyi September 27 2015, 05:03:20 UTC
lol Lu Han I understand but Jongin only appeared for one and a half scenes xD I'm glad you liked them both and the story as well. ThaNK YOU SO MUCH for reading and commenting♡♡♡ omg my other works >///

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brittlepin September 4 2015, 21:37:53 UTC
ohhh I was waiting for something like this D':

I like the warm feeling that floats around the fic, from beginning to end, and the lovely chemistry that's palpable between all the characters (inc Jongin and Jongdae xD). The way the dynamics were shown was lovely, with touches of soft and creams and I'm not even sure if my words are making sense to you, but that's how I felt :) Like hot chocolate and soft breeze and a good day with a blue sky :')

This was lovely reading ヽ(゚ヮ゚)ノ

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zhgyi September 27 2015, 05:05:25 UTC
LOL omg Jongdae, that world-hating, always angry guy xD

omg your metaphors make me feel all fuzzy inside. I know what you mean xD Omg I'm so glad this fic pleased you. Thank you so much reading and commenting!♡♡♡

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nadinadara September 5 2015, 16:20:57 UTC
this is cute! i feel all sorts of fluffy reading this
n_n they are ridiculously cute istg
i love that little bit about xiuhan finding each other first too <3

i absolutely adored the moments sehun had with each of them! and when he was feeling a little out of sorts, even the others could sense it and-
that LOVERVENTION! they're ridiculously adorable wtf im gonna flip my laptop

i love this so much! <3333

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zhgyi September 27 2015, 05:07:18 UTC
LOL PLEASE PRESERVE YOUR LAPTOP XD I'm so glad this made you feel....strongly ahahaha Thank you for reading and for commenting!!♡♡♡

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phorias October 21 2015, 22:53:39 UTC
I haven't read any poly fics before so I was like hmmm, should I read this... should I not... so I gave it a try and it honestly surprised me because this was so good and it made me feel so MUCH I was a mess when I finished reading it. Besides, each character has its own flaws and strong points (which I love!!! the most!!! *stares at luhan*). I really enjoyed itttt and I would read it again for sure, I'm glad my first poly fic was this nice :3 thank you for writing it!

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