Purple

Sep 17, 2008 14:37

Okay! Time for another poem. This was also a class project. We had to do a poem about any color we wanted and use all these metaphors and stuff. I really liked how it turned out even though it's a bit weird...^^" *scratches back of head*

Douzo!~

Purple

Purple is an orchid blooming;
the beginning of a new day.
Purple is what you’ll see when you look ( Read more... )

poetry, purple

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crashandborn September 17 2008, 19:06:41 UTC
"Purple is the ugly bruise that shows its angry mark for all to see,
except for the one in your heart."

That one made my stomach clench, for real.
I can't believe how amazing you've gotten!!!
You're definitely a hell a lot better than me now.

I love this poetry! And this purple poem turned out friggin perfect!
I'm glad you found all those purple things, lol.

Keep Posting MORE!
- SASUSASUSASUSASUSASUSASU:3

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xhina_chanx September 17 2008, 23:59:00 UTC
Domo arigatou!! Your so sweet^^
That was one of my favorite lines too. My teacher came up with a bruise but I made a physical and emotional one ^^"

I'm so glad you like it! You don't know how much I appreciate your kind words! I feel so lucky to have support like this :D

Don't worry. I'll definatley keep writing more. Another one is coming up. Really hard core but all my friends say it's amazing *embarrased* >//////////////////>...
I just wanna run it by my teacher first^^ Thanks again!~

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lovejuicen September 25 2008, 01:43:58 UTC
"Purple are the clouds that fill your imaginary world where purple dragons eat grape flavored lollipops"

so i finally read your PURPLE poem
and i loved it!
so cute!!!...altho i was never into barney
but like seriously.
the dragons r the best :-D

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xhina_chanx September 25 2008, 23:20:39 UTC
Hah hah. I wonder why the dragons are you're favorite part...hmmm....NOPE! Can't think of a thing ^^"

It was one of my favorite poems but I'm too afraid to read them to my class so I get my friends to read it for me...^^"..eh heh heh

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

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