I wrote these 2 songs, I wonder if anyone is interested?

[xheatdishx]

wellp, I'm not much for putting my personal life online anymore, so I'm going to use this LJ to post my lyrics and see what everyone thinks.

Song 1 - "Replayed in a Sober Daze" Remove the bullet from my head

Comments

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[anonymous]

sounds like you have alot of hurt inside of you as do i

[anonymous]

She sits
she thinks
she cries
she thinks of special times
when everything was fine
so new
so true
and now oh so blue
so time does pass
love did not last
she wonders why
why
why
could not love be mine
make mistakes
and hearts do break
advice think twice
"time will heal"
"try to deal"
sometimes you cannot fix
the feelings that do mix
so try to go on
lay in the lawn
stare at the sky
and wonder why
why
why
why the pain
and no gain

but then again she knows she did it to herself

a foolish thing to do
i wish that he was you

should i settle
for cold hard metal
or should i wait
for heavens gate

i hope my prince will come
so now i bite my tongue

so she sits with all this pain
and just tries to forget the rain.

this to is from my own personal experience