Take Me On A Ride

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Title: Take Me On A Ride
Pairing: Jaebum/Jinyoung
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jinyoung gets impatient during a roadtrip. Jaebum knows exactly how to shut him up.
A/N: Written for astrospaces, the only person who I can truly thirst after Jaebum with. Happy birthday!! <33

Comments

[astrospaces]

FREAKING FRACKER YES SPOT

[astrospaces]

YES YES YES OMG HAVE I EVER TOLD YOU HOW MUCH I LOVED YOU CUZ I LIKE REALLY FUCKING LOVE YOU HAVE MY BABIES

but srsly ugh where to begin.....
right off the bat jaebum being super agitated and bossy (even when he's not a ceo he's ceo af) was so so hot omg
AND THEN "Oh, don't worry, I have a great way for you to make better use of your mouth,"
"If you know what I mean."
THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY I WAS NOT PREPARED

BUT THEN "What the fuck are you doing?"
"Putting my mouth to better use,"
I SCREAMED AND DIED AND THEN CAME BACK TO LIFE AND DIED AGAIN FUCK

jb having lube packets in his wallet smh what a slut
AND THEN THE SEX AND EVERYTHING WAS JUST BEAUTIFUL PERFECT AMAZING FANTASTIC
I LOVE YOU LET'S GET MARRIED

ok i'll stop now BUT SERIOUSLY BEST BDAY PRESENT EVER <33333333333333333333

[astrospaces]

WAIT NO I FORGOT ONE PART

"Our secret," Jinyoung promises and he reaches over to lace his fingers with Jaebum's.

Jaebum brings Jinyoung's hand up to his mouth and kisses his knuckles and gives Jinyoung one of his breathtaking smiles before racing off into the darkness.

idk this is just so coupley and so jjp i love it i love you

k im done now i swear

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lmao I'm glad you liked this and I hope this lived up to your expectations and was everything you wanted.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ONCE AGAIN!!

[tripleeedots]

I HAVE NO WORDS BECAUSE THIS IS DAMN HOT AND IM DEAD

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OMG THANK YOU!!!!!

[woohyun]

SCREAMS OMG LMAO IDK WHAT LJ DID BUT MY PREVIOUS COMMENT, I DELETED &^@%#*%$*&!&^!@

THIS IS SO HOT

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SCREAMS BACK AT YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH

omg I love your icon a lot hehe I can't stop staring at it

[noisestorms]

IM
OH YM HOD E S DMFKDKWE D DMSKWOSLD D SMWKWODK

LOUD SCREECHING

I

DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY
OH MY GOD

THIS WAS SO HOT BLESS YOUR SOUL OH SWEET JESUS DJSKSKDKDKDMSMEK YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD DNDJSKENFKDOWOWOE

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CRIES THANK YOUUUU <3

I love your works a lot by the way so thank you for commenting on mine :))

[gotchick]

oh my gosh this was such a pleasant surprise when i saw it on the comm yesterday and i just read it thank you for the awesome start to my weekend!! :3 your jjp makes my day anytime anywhere

when i saw roadtrip at first i thought it was au so when i realized it was canon that was even better ;; i love roadtrip aus so i spazzed *n* this was short but brain meltingly hot and so fluffy at the same time!!! :Q__ your prose just gets better and better with every fic its so crisp and beautiful and your imagery is so vivid and gorgeous cries

as always i love your title ;n; jaebum visiting jinyoung's parents omgg my feels. i love all the place names you include like jinhae and daegu like i mentioned before it really adds a sense of authenticity to your fic :) oh my god the line in your cut hottest line everrr. their banter is so snarky and full of ust sobs you are the best at writing dialogue

"Oh, don't worry, I have a great way for you to make better use of your mouth," Jaebum smirks as he grabs Jinyoung's hand and places it on top of his

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omggg haha I'm so embarrassed I cannot believe there were that many mistakes in there I literally re read it and edited 5 times Idk how I missed those?? Thank you so much for pointing it out to me omg I didn't even know wicked was spelled wrong I stared at it for a whole min before realizing

ANYWAYS thank you for leaving me another glorious long comment I actually read it on my train ride back this time lmao only you can take apart a pwp and still analyze it so amazingly hehe <333