Take Me On A Ride
Title: Take Me On A Ride
Pairing: Jaebum/Jinyoung
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jinyoung gets impatient during a roadtrip. Jaebum knows exactly how to shut him up.
A/N: Written for astrospaces, the only person who I can truly thirst after Jaebum with. Happy birthday!! <33
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Pairing: Jaebum/Jinyoung
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jinyoung gets impatient during a roadtrip. Jaebum knows exactly how to shut him up.
A/N: Written for astrospaces, the only person who I can truly thirst after Jaebum with. Happy birthday!! <33
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when i saw roadtrip at first i thought it was au so when i realized it was canon that was even better ;; i love roadtrip aus so i spazzed *n* this was short but brain meltingly hot and so fluffy at the same time!!! :Q__ your prose just gets better and better with every fic its so crisp and beautiful and your imagery is so vivid and gorgeous cries
as always i love your title ;n; jaebum visiting jinyoung's parents omgg my feels. i love all the place names you include like jinhae and daegu like i mentioned before it really adds a sense of authenticity to your fic :) oh my god the line in your cut hottest line everrr. their banter is so snarky and full of ust sobs you are the best at writing dialogue
"Oh, don't worry, I have a great way for you to make better use of your mouth," Jaebum smirks as he grabs Jinyoung's hand and places it on top of his inner thigh before slowing trailing his hand up to his belt buckle. "If you know what I mean."
holy shit can jaebum stop being a BAMF for one minute
Cat got your tongue? KITTY KINK!!! :B
Suddenly, Jinyoung knows exactly what Jaebum needs in order to release his unnecessary tension.
lmao oh snap jinyoung is such a genius tbh
SEVEN HEARTBEATS cries so beautiful ;;;;
omg jaebum lost control of the car thats kinda dangerous tbh kids don't imitate pls xD
he has the most whicked glint in his eyes
you have a typo here just letting you know in case you wanted to edit but it didn't take away from the hotness of the sentence!! :P
what he can't fit in his mouth
im sure thats a lot if you know what i mean /leers omg what am i saying you're corrupting my innocence with your smut :( not gonna quote the smut bc i loved EVERY line of it but you know its incredibly, unbelievably hot huhu
jinyoung with black hair weeps how did you know thats my weakness
omg jaebum's sudden concern that jinyoung's not wearing his seatbelt made me lose it i love how you include unexpected subtle moments of loving tenderness in the middle of all the pwp ;A;
UGH YES jaebum casually pulling over and lowering his seat lol spontaneity ftw and jinyoung toppling into jaebum's lap!!!!
"Want you," Jinyoung mumbles FAVE LINE IN THE FIC SF SWEET
The breathy moan that escapes Jaebum's mouth is like music to Jinyoung's ears, a melody he wants to listen to on repeat.
SO GORGEOUS ;-; jaebum's feelings for jinyoung are so tangible
lol at jaebum walking around always prepared
"You never know when you might need it," truer words have never been spoken someone put this on a t-shirt
"Lift your hips for me baby,"
O M G for some reason the lack of a comma makes this sentence even hotter?? ;A; JAEBUM CALLING JINYOUNG BABY please make this real
"Can I fuck you now," Jaebum whispers darkly
same for the comma instead of question mark in this sentence and jaebum whispering darkly unfff
JINYOUNG MEWLING this precious kitten
Jinyoung, being the responsible member that he is lmfao
while swallowing all the beautiful sounds that tu. It doesn't take long
umm i think your sentence got cut off here hahaha just letting you know in case you didn't notice!! :3 it wasn't distracting at all from the fic tho :)
jaebum's adams apple dfskfjkdsjfkds
the smut was so deliciously graphic I CAN DIE HAPPY NOW /nosebleeds to oblivion ;;;
Jaebum kisses Jinyoung sweetly, lips lingering for a few seconds too long.
omgg the warmth here he loves jinyoung so much TT
a police car decides to show up and they find themselves arrested for public sex and indecency
LMAO BEST GOT7 SCANDAL PLS HAPPEN
let's keep this to ourselves umm like DUH LOL XD
Jaebum brings Jinyoung's hand up to his mouth and kisses his knuckles and gives Jinyoung one of his breathtaking smiles before racing off into the darkness.
CRYING idk why but the "racing off into the darkness" part got me now i have racing au!jjp feels take responsibILITY
this was so fantastic ten thumbs up i approve of you writing pwp more often d:Db
happy bday astrospaces!!! :3
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ANYWAYS thank you for leaving me another glorious long comment I actually read it on my train ride back this time lmao only you can take apart a pwp and still analyze it so amazingly hehe <333
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