How Did This Sound Get So Amped Up

Jan 27, 2015 23:31

Title: How Did This Sound Get So Amped Up
Pairing: Jaebum/Jinyoung (mentions of Jinyoung/Jackson)
Rating: R
Summary: Jaebum doesn't know when he started loving Jinyoung more than what was necessary.
A/N: This fic is literally 8 months overdue, but it's written for the amazing gotchick :)

And Jaebum thinks he'll catch Jinyoung right now, tomorrow, in this lifetime and the next lifetime too. Because Jinyoung's his and he was Jinyoung's. Always and forever. )

fandom: got7, rating: r, pairing: jaebum/jinyoung, length: oneshot, (fanfic)

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jabbathecup January 28 2015, 05:39:35 UTC
SPOT

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jabbathecup January 28 2015, 05:52:17 UTC
OK SO let me just preface this by saying i'm an emotional wreck rn so this might be incoherent af but bear with me

OMG jaebum being bamf right off the bat by being late to auditions. he's such a bad boy drools

Jaebum is all sharp and harsh lines, resorts to punches instead of words, an enigma caught up in the night, but Jinyoung finds himself falling deeper into the darkness, desperately wanting to be the only person who can unwrap the mystery that's Im Jaebum.

Jinyoung doesn't tell Jaebum that he often sees his face when he closes his eyes at night while drifting off to sleep. Jaebum, with his dangerous smile and fiery touch.
idk but i really like this passage it just flows nicely ands like poetic idk i'm terrible at analyzing this type of things ok it's just pretty lol

It's because you're my best friend.

It's because it's always been us against the world.

It's because I love you.
i seriously started bawling at this part MY HEART

also the kiss scene CAN I PLEASE BE JINYOUNG PLEASE

Jaebum thinks maybe that's how he ended up ( ... )

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xfragments January 29 2015, 01:34:45 UTC
we've already discussed this on kkt hehe but cries thank you for quoting all your fave parts and im really happy you read this despite the lack of sex lmao <3 BUT DONT WORRY cause next week ill spoil you with jjp carsex

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ancoats January 28 2015, 06:49:37 UTC
i am so emotional right now because all i ever want to do is read the development of jjp's entire relationship from meeting to friendship to everythinggGgGGG and i love especially the way jaebum's just super intense ways of feeling things work out both in their favor (because he just loves jinyoung so much and it's so real and sincere and genuine) but also has the potential to be destructive in his jealousy and possessiveness and the way his moods are just like soooo extreme. that was captured so well and that is so jaebum. this was great, 10/10, would read again yes

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xfragments January 29 2015, 01:31:13 UTC
yesss their development of their relationship is everything. thank you so much for reading and thank you for thinking i captured jaebum's character well! <333

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gotchick January 28 2015, 08:59:45 UTC
im still screaming i can't believe you really dedicated this to me!!! omfg you've already dedicated 2 amazing fics to me and both of them are like the best jjps in fandom?? i feel so proud and honoured dfgjfdkjgf you know all my jjp is for you too right? ;A; and btw im not amazing YOU'RE THE AMAZING ONE ( ... )

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gotchick January 28 2015, 09:01:11 UTC
i love how sensitively you portrayed jinyoung's vulnerabilities and self doubt despite his confidence. and the running symbolism of the history of their names and how they're "meant for greatness" that you revived at the end ugh so genius!!!
INTOXICATED KISSES hnggh my favourite i love how natural the progression of their relationship is to a physical one and how theres no excess angst or drama and stuff.
Jaebum kisses like how he lives life, aggressive, messy and passionate SO BEAUTIFUL MY FAVE LINE
"If you shut up, I'll show you why," Jaebum looks at him pointedly. UNFF SO HOT
i was gonna quote that whole chunk of text but better not lmao just know that i absolutely loved the way you interspersed jaebum's thoughts with his actions and squealed at "licking hot stripes everywhere" ;A;
sobs i love their breakfast routine and gojujang sauce is so delicious now im hungry :9
Jaebum leads and Jinyoung follows. this line reminded me of the "lead me" lyrics in aoa's like a cat and basically summarizes their dynamic UGHH how do you do this ( ... )

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gotchick January 28 2015, 09:02:25 UTC
jinson movie date aksdjkadjksdjk and jjp guitar place date!!! and jaebum speaking japanese hngggh
Jackson and Mark back to the other dorm. JACKSON AND MARK LIVE IN A SEPARATE DORM? YESSS MARKSON IS REAL
hahaha i love how yugyeom is suddenly there its like so natural and wonderful ;;;;
omg jinyoung not wanting to debut without jaebum SO SWEET and loyal and jaebum saying "It's not my dream unless you're there with me." JUST KILL ME
jackson pushing jaebum's buttons mmm yes
oh my god jackbum's love-hate relationship here is giving me so many feels i feel like betraying jjp
LOL jinyoung calling jackson fatass SO CUTE and omg the conflict in the choreography scene was so well set up!! it seems totally like something they'd get into an argument over haha
"Make me," Jackson huffs as he glances towards Jaebum.

"Jackson, don't make me-"
im screaming jackson provoking jaebum is what i live for
Jaebum's never liked people touching things that don't belong to them what is this dying goat sound coming out of me ( ... )

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gotchick January 28 2015, 09:03:30 UTC
their birthday tradition is SO ADORABLE ;A;A; cries those songs jinyoung has flawless taste in music obviously and
Jinyoung's a step ahead of him as he slaps his hand across the door frame, blocking Jaebum from entering.
his temper is sooo hot im getting top!jinyoung feels
his accent coming out when he's upset is so cute
"I'm still your hyung." HOTTEST THING JB HAS EVER SAID TO JR ( ... )

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psycho_d68 January 28 2015, 14:13:46 UTC
i swear this fic is so damn good !
goshhhhhh, i literally went insane while reading this by smiling & screaming like a mad person...

"he only knows how to love Jinyoung"
" I always worry about you the most!"
"I'm yours. Always have been and always will be"

definitely my fav sentences in this story... awwwww, its just so f sweettttttttttttttt ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
sweetness overload it made me i feel like im having diabetic... lol XD

theres so many great JJP fics i discovered in LJ.... im a happy person ^.^

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xfragments January 29 2015, 01:31:47 UTC
wahhh thank you so much for reading <33
i'm so glad you liked it!!

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candycane23049 January 28 2015, 18:16:14 UTC
OMG.. I have no word's this was perfect.

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xfragments January 29 2015, 01:31:28 UTC
CRIES THANK YOU SO MUCH <3

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