Immortal

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Wrote thise little drabble/Oneshot for my best friend, Nancy, who is the Hungary to my Prussia. ^L^
Now I know that in no part of the story was Lizzie in her green dress and Prussia in his white knight outfit, but hey, it's fanFICTION, AMIRIGHT? Xd

Name: Immortal
Rating: PG (For character death and boob-talk)
Pairings: PruHun and Germancest
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Comments

[daemoninwhite]

I have a massive, massive thing for Germancest and this ... this is just fantastic. Very, very sad, and it really tugs at your heartstrings. Just fyi, you've messed up here: After a few moments, sbhe felt it appropriate to find a way through the crowd and lay a hand on his shoulder softly, kneading his muscles a bit. Should just be 'she'.

Also, nnnng, Shakespeare and the way he describes death. In Hamlet, I can't remember the exact name, but when Hamlet stabs his father's advisor, the advisor calls, 'O, I am slain!', and dies, but that's more laughable than profound in my opinion.

What makes me saddest is that Word Of God has it that Gil will die eventually... Nooooooo.

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I have to say, I am the worst proof-reader you'll ever meet. Sorry! I'll fix that ASAP!

And I kinda stole the whole "He Dies" from Mr. Magorium's Wonder Imporium (The movie) and stuck the credit in at the bottom. Every time I see that part, I think of Gilbert lately. I'm not a big Shakespeare person....I don't know why, but I've never had the urge to see/read any of his plays, so I wouldn't know XD

Anyway, thank you so much for the comment!!!

[bloodandpepper]

This was wonderful. I really like Lizzie's point of view - it's authentic and very deep. And I can really and perfectly picture Gil's death would've been like this. Dying with a smile that challenge hell into a fistfight. Fuck yeah!

You did a great job here.

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Thank you for the compliments!
I really wanted to make her as real as possible, seeing as my best friend would be reading it, and we've dubbed her Lizzie.
....and the sad part actually is, I can see Gilbo overthrowing Satan...Or trying to, at least....

[toscas_kiss]

Lovely.

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Thank you. ^L^