Pretty good, but spelling/grammatical errors and a bit of stunted dialogue pulled me out of it. Interesting premise. The ending kinda of seems rushed and I have no idea what you mean by the last line. If you're trying to be metaphorical, it's not clicking. Dr. Cox was characterized very well throughout the fic; very consistent. I suggest a beta for your next fic, since it alway helps to have a second set of fresh eyes on something. *thumbs up* Hope you take what I've said into consideration, thanks :)
I love how we always have the same opinions on stories. :)
OP, nighthawkms is right on all counts. There are some grammatical errors, including several run-ons followed by fragments. I would be willing to beta for you; I have my degree in Commucations/English.
Nicely done! I agree about the grammar/spelling, but that's pretty common in Scrubs fic, so... Anyway, I did enjoy this, but just one thing that kind of threw me: Dr. Cox, a man of few words? Hmmmm...
LOL I betaed it already! Thanks a lot! LOL (The grammar/spelling comments were made last night the first time she posted it and prior to my proofreading)
heh, no disrespect intended... I really, really try to ignore that stuff when I read Scrubs fic, but when other people comment on it, I feel ok about it ;) Anyway, still thrown by Dr. Cox as a man of few words, but enjoyed the story :)
Hey, chica. I loved being able to proofread it, but I didn't proofread this entire story, so please don't give me credit for the whole thing. Your second section has many of the same problems, and I would have been willing to beta that, as well.
AND, you reversed where I corrected your "your/you're" error.: ("It's o.k, your ok.." ) Honestly, I don't mean to be a bitch about the whole thing, but if you're going to ask me to beta something for you, don't change my corrections and add things that are un'beta'd. It makes me look like I don't know my own grammar rules.
LOL it's ok. Let me know if you want me to fix the rest of it.
As a good rule of thumb: "your" denotes possession, and "you're" is a contraction of "you are." A good way to remember this is to replace the word "you are" for the word in your head; if it still works, use "you're."
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OP, nighthawkms is right on all counts. There are some grammatical errors, including several run-ons followed by fragments. I would be willing to beta for you; I have my degree in Commucations/English.
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As a good rule of thumb: "your" denotes possession, and "you're" is a contraction of "you are." A good way to remember this is to replace the word "you are" for the word in your head; if it still works, use "you're."
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