My Sickness

[xemo_chick]

Fandom: Scrubs
Title: My Sickness
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Comments

[lemonade_twist]

I'm really excited to read more of this, but there are a few minor spelling and grammar errors. I'm just trying to give you some constructive criticsm.

[xemo_chick]

Thanks so much, totally forgot to spell check :)

[scruby]

Wow, that was really good! And oh so sad.):
Poor JD. God, I hate cancer...

I loved the part were Perry tells JD he'll do anything for him and he won't let him die.(:

I really hope there would be more to that because I would really like to read it.

[xemo_chick]

Thanks so much for reading!!!! And I think I'm going to continue as soon as I have some time :)

[scruby]

Yay.(:

[artura_nemesis]

Oooooh I love it! I really really want to hear more and see how it turns out. Dr. Cox is being such a good guy right now, supporting JD like that. Awww! And very In Character. Keep going, I will cheer you on!

[xemo_chick]

Thanks for the characterization compliment. :) I was worried I had written Cox a little to nice, but I suppose he would be this nice if JD was sick with cancer. :)

[mcmuffins_js]

Is this part of a series? Nice start :) What kind of cancer? I'm suprised JD thought it was just a cold, being a doctor... But I guess that's why doctors make the worst patients!

[xemo_chick]

Im not sure what kind of Cancer, and since i'm now planning on continuing the fic I'm gonna have to do some research, lol. But yea, I think JD knew he was sick, he just wanted to deny it to himself somehow, and saying it was a cold seemed good hehe. But yes, doctors really do make bad patients. Thanks for reading :)

[purplesyringes]

Oh God. *whimper* Cancer? Is there going to more of this? I need more!

This is very good and it seems very promising. More please. :D

[xemo_chick]

Thanks so much. :)