Title: §2 One step at a time III [original tittle "Heat of the beach", originally aired November 23, 2011]
Collection: Heat of Hawaii
Author: xcsimisiax
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny {but other characters regularly appear}
Notes: It's a reboot of my orginal story, it's time for changes.
Summary: “But I have sex with you a lot in
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OK breath breath....well verry hard for this moment....yeeah u rock my world babe and set me on fire tonight, hope u're aware of that1! I was waitin for so long time for this moment...to see all part done and here it is and yeah u tottaly fuckin set me on fire!! Do I need cold shower?? No at all!! LOL ofc I do <3
Awwwww I'll tomorrow leave u much bigger comment babe....be sure in this!!! YEAH!!! OMG now need some time to catch my breath...this last part wt Steve just set my mind and all me on fire!! Burn to the ground this night!! Awwwwwww <3 <3
Awwwwwwwww babe. WHAT U DID TO ME NOW!!!!??????
I loooooove this feeling <3 This part is tottally amazin and
I'm in love <3 Mahalooooo for setin me on fire!!! OH YEAH!!!
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Ahahaha.
Cant wait for more..
(more comment tomorrow. i'm to tired to make it now)
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The fluff party was great, all Steve's concentration on Monkey, was beautiful, and she gets a boyfriend ... you're wanting to mess with Danno ... hahahaha
Now the superhotsexintheofficer part was great! I had loved the first version, that thing cock stroking in short, killed me 300 times! Shower, water dripping up his ass, but part of the office was more than good ... was PERFECT! And twice ... bye was a pleasure to meet you bitch!
But while I do not die of horny look forward to the next chapter ...
LUV'yall
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