§2 One step at a time III [REBOOT]

Sep 30, 2012 22:20


Title: §2 One step at a time III [original tittle "Heat of the beach", originally aired November 23, 2011]
Collection: Heat of Hawaii
Author: xcsimisiax
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Characters/Pairings: Steve/Danny {but other characters regularly appear}
Notes: It's a reboot of my orginal story, it's time for changes.
Summary:  “But I have sex with you a lot in ( Read more... )

fic: steve/danno, rating: nc-17, hawaii five-0, danny williams, fiction: slash, heat of hawaii, steve mcgarrett

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AWWWWWWWWWWWWW BABEEEEE <3 ext_1183844 September 30 2012, 21:24:08 UTC
OMFG!!!
OK breath breath....well verry hard for this moment....yeeah u rock my world babe and set me on fire tonight, hope u're aware of that1! I was waitin for so long time for this moment...to see all part done and here it is and yeah u tottaly fuckin set me on fire!! Do I need cold shower?? No at all!! LOL ofc I do <3
Awwwww I'll tomorrow leave u much bigger comment babe....be sure in this!!! YEAH!!! OMG now need some time to catch my breath...this last part wt Steve just set my mind and all me on fire!! Burn to the ground this night!! Awwwwwww <3 <3
Awwwwwwwww babe. WHAT U DID TO ME NOW!!!!??????
I loooooove this feeling <3 This part is tottally amazin and
I'm in love <3 Mahalooooo for setin me on fire!!! OH YEAH!!!

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and again: Holy shit! ext_1396645 September 30 2012, 21:27:50 UTC
ok...I read this. And I had to calm down a little bit. Okay not only a little bit ( ... )

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darkhairana September 30 2012, 21:31:32 UTC
Damn you are so evil with the end like this. Not just to us but to Steve too. Leaving him in the same ''hard'' position that he was going through this whole part.

Ahahaha.

Cant wait for more..

(more comment tomorrow. i'm to tired to make it now)

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Jesus Christ mcdanno_isa September 30 2012, 23:13:34 UTC
Ok I'll start like this: if I were a man would be equal to our McDanno ... hard hard hard!! Jesus girl, warning to read alone did not help anything, my family left, arrived, and I was still in a catatonic state ... LOL
The fluff party was great, all Steve's concentration on Monkey, was beautiful, and she gets a boyfriend ... you're wanting to mess with Danno ... hahahaha
Now the superhotsexintheofficer part was great! I had loved the first version, that thing cock stroking in short, killed me 300 times! Shower, water dripping up his ass, but part of the office was more than good ... was PERFECT! And twice ... bye was a pleasure to meet you bitch!
But while I do not die of horny look forward to the next chapter ...
LUV'yall

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"Step by step" ext_1095302 October 1 2012, 04:52:47 UTC
my goodness, Domi! love is exploding from every pore! beautiful and wonderful, it makes me more and more falling in love with these two!

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