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Ill Met by Moonlight

May 07, 2007 23:38

Ill Met by Moonlight

Disclaimer: The Winchester brothers, even within this incarnation, are regrettably not my creation.
Word Count: 4622
Pairings: Dean/OFC, Sam/OFC (implied) (HET)
Rating: NC-17 (Naughty Victorian smut, boots and even more broken furniture.)
Spoilers: A very wee shout-out to my own storyline at the very end.
Miscellaneous: ( Read more... )

genre: het, series: supernatural by gaslight, rating: nc-17, pairing: dean/ofc, challenge: spn_het_love

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elanurel May 9 2007, 01:13:58 UTC

I do wonder if she ever succeeded, or if they will be picking up the count now...

I believe Deane distracts her but Penelope is stubborn... ;-P

Oh, DEANE. It's like the Gaslight equivalent of Carmen's "I just have low standards." :(

I wrote it back in March, which I was writing Chapter Seven - that's part of the scene I scrapped because it wasn't working in the chapter. So was Penny admitting that she loved him. Deane's original rejoinder was sentimental, but I made it a joke instead that said the exact same thing.

Victorian!Winchester is hard.

I did not realize until you posted this just how much I have missed the Gaslight crew. It's been a good long while.

Methinks that we'll be getting another chapter soon. I need to finish up Old!Chesters and Cowboy Smile specifically, and then more things will start coming out to play. Maybe for ficlets and stand-alones. I thought about doing a Victorian Wee!Chesters with Deane and Penny and Sammy...

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elanurel May 9 2007, 01:17:40 UTC

*is blushing*

I love how you divulged Deane's little secret about that fateful trip to Westshire

*hee*

I figured that I needed to give a little love to the folks who have waited so patiently for an installment and, instead, got this. I had always intended that to be the case. He saw Penelope, thought she was pretty and paid the coachman. He never knew she was Penny, though. ;-P

Oh and is it possible for Deane and Penelope have 'relations' without breaking a piece of furniture?

Deane's hypothesis is "no" but that's what the Grand Experiment is for, after all... (Well, that and a way of telling Penelope that she is always a part of his life. Is sneaky, that Winchester...)

And okay, couldn't resist a giggle or two at the vocabulary you incorporated into the smut

I was particularly proud of the fact that I used "manuals of love's devotions" and "engine of love's assault" in the same paragraph. How was that for juxtaposition?

I almost expected the woman to insist on drawing Deane nudeActually, I wonder if the picture of Deane ( ... )

vaznetti May 8 2007, 23:20:57 UTC

That sex scene totally cracked me up! OMG the vocabulary!

This was a lot of fun.

elanurel May 9 2007, 01:18:44 UTC

I'm still proud of the "manuals of love's devotion/engine of love's assault" juxtaposition. ;-P

Thanks! I missed writing the 'verse and while the characters were a titch on the wordy side (even for them), the banter does seem to be coming back so...expect more in the main storyline!

starpixie16 May 8 2007, 23:46:58 UTC

Lovely smut, and I have to say I've truly missed the boot!porn that this 'verse always brings. ;P And the highly amusing Victorian era erotic terms are a delightful bonus!

As always, I love the interaction between Deane and Penny.

“Although why you should want me,” he added, “Is beyond my limited understanding.”

I had a little "aw, Deane..." moment there. Deep down, he always doubts himself as being worthy of any woman's affection. He's so beautifully damaged.

And I absolutely loved his adorable little suggestion of examining furnishings across the continent "for the good of mankind". ;D

elanurel May 9 2007, 01:22:48 UTC

Lovely smut, and I have to say I've truly missed the boot!porn that this 'verse always brings. ;P And the highly amusing Victorian era erotic terms are a delightful bonus!

I had to use some old favorites (like the sweet laboratory of love) but this one was a hoot. It just seemed so miserable, between the cot and the water, and the silly terms just made it funny as hell. I'm apparently not allowed to write Victorian!Winchesters right before a vacation...because I shirked my cleaning duties yesterday to finish it.

As always, I love the interaction between Deane and Penny.

Me, too. I had forgotten how much I missed them. Dean and Penny in GS have a similar vibe, but Deane and Penelope are so much snarkier. I think I do that to undercut the overtly schmoopy tone of the prose.

I had a little "aw, Deane..." moment there. Deep down, he always doubts himself as being worthy of any woman's affection. He's so beautifully damaged.

I think that's something we really saw played out in the last episode, too.

And I absolutely loved ( ... )

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elanurel May 9 2007, 01:27:16 UTC

Whoa, Deane and Victorian smut! :p,

It is my guilty Supernatural fandom pleasure, this love I have of all things boots...

I am definitely liking this... especially fell into some giggle fits over your verbage. I'm glad to see I was supposed to laugh! LOL!

You definitely are. I remember some folks asking me, "Are you going to be upset if I laughed?" It's hard to write a hot smut scene when you're replacing normal words we're used to with "sweet laboratory of love" and "redheaded champion" (which made the divine QF snort coffee). I actually used that whole disparity between language in the initial Gobsmacked story, which was a modern Dean and Victorian Penny PWP I wrote for pheebs1. (Of course, modern Penny kind of hijacked it in the end and it's now a 'verse. Damn her...)

I need to go back and read your other Victorian!verse, because this is a really interesting take on these characters. So original! Wonderful job!,Thank you! The boys actually lend themselves well to common literary archetypes of the time period, and I have a lovely ( ... )