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Ill Met by Moonlight

May 07, 2007 23:38

Ill Met by Moonlight

Disclaimer: The Winchester brothers, even within this incarnation, are regrettably not my creation.
Word Count: 4622
Pairings: Dean/OFC, Sam/OFC (implied) (HET)
Rating: NC-17 (Naughty Victorian smut, boots and even more broken furniture.)
Spoilers: A very wee shout-out to my own storyline at the very end.
Miscellaneous: ( Read more... )

genre: het, series: supernatural by gaslight, rating: nc-17, pairing: dean/ofc, challenge: spn_het_love

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elanurel May 8 2007, 15:10:36 UTC

Oh, you're absolutely meant to laugh. I started the whole 'verse because of Jensen Ackles' boots and I decided if I was going Victorian melodrama, there had to be a lot of the funny in it. This was what I actually write when I personally am depressed or burnt out from other writing (particularly Strange Angels, which takes a lot out of me emotionally to write because it is so dark).

I did have to carry on the long (well, long-ish) tradition of Deane and Penelope breaking furniture and carrying on bantery conversations, even during more delicate moments. ;-P

zelost_mind May 8 2007, 07:34:05 UTC

Oh, man. *wipes tear* I giggled and giggled, I really enjoy the banter between these two, in case I haven't told you before.

Thank you, for this grin on my face.

elanurel May 8 2007, 15:12:49 UTC

Woo-hoo!

Penelope and Deane have the best banter, don't they? They're a wee bit snarkier than even their Gobsmacked counterparts, methinks because the overall tone of this is a bit schmoopier than my other stories; I cut that with Deane and Penelope being snarky.

And you're welcome. Writing this has made me feel a wee bit more like myself after my weekend of wishing I could use my velvet hammer of stupid earth monkey smiting on 90% of the people I encountered.

misskatieleigh May 8 2007, 07:34:44 UTC

ahh Victorian smexin' ftw!

:D this brings me such glee ♥

elanurel May 8 2007, 15:13:53 UTC

It was long overdue. I was worried that it wasn't coming out well but decided to post it anyway. I mean, it's not meant to be great fiction. I wanted something funny that would make people laugh, and there it is. ;-P

misskatieleigh May 8 2007, 22:01:23 UTC

it was entertaining :D

elanurel May 9 2007, 01:23:29 UTC

I forgot how much fun it was to write snark during sex. Dean/Penny and Dean/Charlie get it a little but Deane/Penelope? Boy howdy!

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elanurel May 8 2007, 15:16:06 UTC

Thank you!

The real problem with writing the Victorian smut is that I always tell myself, "OK, this time we're going for something more serious and it's going to be hot, like Gobsmacked hot because it's the same damn characters." Nope, the moment you start flinging in terms like "sweet laboratory of love," you can no longer go for the hot so you must go for the funny.

But nothing beats writing Penelope Harcourt and Deane Winchester snarkage.

quellefromage May 8 2007, 16:03:50 UTC

Although there are no goggles herein, you are forgiven. *g* The rampant smutage and furniture demise is well worth the price of admission. I'm glad your Gaslight pron has been relit.

elanurel May 9 2007, 01:11:09 UTC

I promise most sincerely that the next chapter will have goggles. It probably won't have smut but it will have goggles. (Yes, I got stalled on a smut scene; it just didn't fit. And this scene had the same moment in it, albiet Deane got to be snarky instead of schmoopy. We all win. ;-P)

Hope you have wrestled the travel demons mightily at this point!

*hugs*