Quicksand

[x_saru_x]

Title: Quicksand
Author: moi
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Songfic
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own the boys. Hell, I don't even own the lyrics.
Summary: Oh, when you turn to me, I'm in the quicksand

Comments

[siaht]

cries I'm lost too. ;o; this is so intense, I wish I could listen to the song too but I guess I'm gonna have to do that later when I can, and read again to absorb it better. the lyrics are beautiful and the fic is just as beautiful ♥

sorry I'm kinda smitten right now. they're tmth.

[x_saru_x]

Smitten is a word that makes me really really satisfied ;~;

The lyrics are beautiful indeed, I was actually sad to let a part of them out of the fic. But *sobs* I'm delighted you liked it this much!

Thank you ♥

[honeyflavor]

Aw, I can actually picture twisted!Kibum. This was sad :(
I promise to listen to the song later~

[x_saru_x]

Blame it for changing my plans on the last minute ;~;
yeah well you better, cause I know were you live and all >:(

Thanks for reading ♥

[rina_sg]

*pouts* this was so wonderful ♥

I really liked the song, and ofcourse its lyrics are.. ;~;

[x_saru_x]

So glad you think so ;~;
I adore this song, as I do with most of their stuff, too. They're just so good at what they do ♥

Thank you for reading <3

[kyaa_kawaii]

I've been waiting for an opportunity to use this icon, and finally I get to do it because this. This. Hit me right here *holds hand over heart* ;~;

Idek, it was so ... augh, I can't even put a name to it, twisted, maybe? I mean, the beginning started out fine, the end - not quite so fine. The lyrics fit perfectly (the song's good, btw) and I really would love to get into Key's brain, to see what he was thinking.

He's lost, so lost. >:(( Am not sure why, but as I read that, I kind of got the mental picture of a cliff and a maze smashed together. I don't know how that would work but. Like, falling from a cliff into a maze, or something? Or getting lost in a maze and then coming to the middle and suddenly fall down down down? I honestly don't know, I just got a very strong feeling of that, lol. I hope I didn't confuse your pretty little head now. :3

[x_saru_x]

Eeek, icon ;~; I should apologise on its part, then ;~;

Actually, Key kinda broke my heart here, I mean, I don't even know. I need to grab him by the shoulders, shake him, and sob "why are you like this" right into his face. And that's about my interaction with fictitious characters T_T

And I've never felt that myself, but it must be pretty freaking burdening :/ Poor Jjong =(

Thank you so much for reading ;~; ♥

[salted_taiyaki]

I had some hopes for, like, a light, quick, happy read but I was so off the mark HA HA

nevertheless it was great to read. this rather...twisted relationship between the two of them was like kljsdf heart wrenching? kibum's character was well played, i kinda liked it~ leaving jjong so disoriented and lost like that ha ha. you don't see it /too/ much, so it was great to see a change. it was different but enjoyable. ah...boy i hope this sadism/heartlessness doesn't become some sorta kink for me.

guh. any thank you very much for sharing har har ♥

[x_saru_x]

No sorry, no lightness here lol

Kibum should come around and stop being so icy, seriously. He hurts me more than he hurts Jjong D: I swear the next thing I write will be fluffy, my heart won't be able to take the angst

Thank you for reading ♥