Title: Quicksand Author: moi Pairing: JongKey Genre: Songfic Rating: PG Disclaimer: I don't own the boys. Hell, I don't even own the lyrics. Summary: Oh, when you turn to me, I'm in the quicksand ( Fic )
*pulls my hair out trying to figure out what Key is thinking*
"Then, for a second, he gets disoriented, shoved back, and his head slightly bounces on the pillow. Next thing he knows, Kibum is hovering over him, something twisted visible on his features, and Jonghyun is torn between feeling scared or attracted. He simply chooses to hold onto the younger's waist.
"Give me one reason not to leave you like this," Kibum says, voice too husky for comfort, and really, this isn't supposed to be happening this way." - Aye...how could he say this to JJong...they're supposed to be together, all lovey-dovey and mushiness but not here =/
Just wondering what is going on through Bummie's mind. He's lost and so am I as to what he is thinking.
At first I was thinking a nice short happy read first thing in the morning but i guess I was totally off. But this was still great and I loved their dynamics of their rather twisted relationship with each other. Key seems like he has all the power and jonghyun's scared to admit his feelings? Erm that's how I interpretted it~ and I think I'll go check out that song now. Thanks for sharing ♥
Haha yes, sorry XD Jonghyun's not even fully in terms with his feelings, I actually think. Key's attitude is a whole different chapter on its own. But I'm so glad you liked the way they work. I was afraid about making the dynamics so different, but I guess it's good, since I got it out of my system lol.
Don't even mention it, thank you for reading. Hope you enjoy the song ♥
I like this, but I would like it more without the lyrics throughout. Like, maybe it would be cool if you only put them at the end and beginning? Or if maybe you just used fewer?
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*pulls my hair out trying to figure out what Key is thinking*
"Then, for a second, he gets disoriented, shoved back, and his head slightly bounces on the pillow. Next thing he knows, Kibum is hovering over him, something twisted visible on his features, and Jonghyun is torn between feeling scared or attracted. He simply chooses to hold onto the younger's waist.
"Give me one reason not to leave you like this," Kibum says, voice too husky for comfort, and really, this isn't supposed to be happening this way." - Aye...how could he say this to JJong...they're supposed to be together, all lovey-dovey and mushiness but not here =/
Just wondering what is going on through Bummie's mind. He's lost and so am I as to what he is thinking.
"glomps you for writing*
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But d'aw, thank you for reading ♥
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Thank you for reading!
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But this was still great and I loved their dynamics of their rather twisted relationship with each other. Key seems like he has all the power and jonghyun's scared to admit his feelings? Erm that's how I interpretted it~ and I think I'll go check out that song now.
Thanks for sharing ♥
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Jonghyun's not even fully in terms with his feelings, I actually think. Key's attitude is a whole different chapter on its own. But I'm so glad you liked the way they work. I was afraid about making the dynamics so different, but I guess it's good, since I got it out of my system lol.
Don't even mention it, thank you for reading.
Hope you enjoy the song ♥
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Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Don't know, but I like this.
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I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you for reading :]
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