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Submission #13 -- Grius, "Wishes Granted"

Oct 31, 2008 19:48

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Title: Wishes Granted
Author: Gruis
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Summary: Life as the former antichrist can be strange. Happily, taking things out on innocent bystanders is still satisfying.

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Comments 17

lucid_babbles November 2 2008, 05:33:16 UTC

:D Awesome fic! Haha, Fuuma and the little girl's frog was one of the cuter moments in the manga. Subaru's appearance in this fic also made it absolute WIN.

metisket December 4 2008, 18:22:15 UTC

Thank you!

Yay for the random cute moments in the manga. ^_^ And I'm glad you liked Subaru. He was strangely tricky to write.

starstruck272 November 24 2008, 16:40:04 UTC

I read it back when it was first posted, sorry for such a late comment D;

*___* I love fic with the 'little girl'~ I like how different they would seem from an ordinary person's point of view~ Thanks for writing this 8D

metisket December 4 2008, 18:27:11 UTC

Better late than never. :) (i STILL owe so many comments oh my god)

I was always curious about what the ordinary people were thinking in the manga. I mean, "Ah. There is a man sitting on top of a telephone pole. ...Wait, what?" Possibly they were distracted by earthquakes and whatnot, but even so.

Thank you for the comment!

sailorcoruscant November 28 2008, 12:03:58 UTC

Another late commenter, who has had this tab open for weeks and been too lazy to do anything about it. Oops.

I love crazy!Fuuma. He's great fun and you did well with the girl too. You've perfectly captured that feeling of "oh man, why do the crazies always decide to sit next to me? !!!" And your Subaru is so sad and broken, but I'm kinda glad he's there to take care of Fuuma. Throwing in the little girl from Ebisu was a great touch too. It all just works so well as a whole.

metisket December 4 2008, 19:01:38 UTC

Thank you so much!

I'm glad you liked the characters. :D Though...I'm not sure Subaru is so much taking care of Fuuma as just hanging around because he has nothing better to do. Still, at least they're not alone. I guess. :)

sailorcoruscant December 4 2008, 20:11:22 UTC

I kinda saw him as reluctant babysitter. No real feelings there, other than a vague sense of duty unfulfilled. He's just there to make sure no one else gets too badly hurt.
Though now that you mention it, I'm not sure I can imagine him intervening if someone was getting hurt, other than saying, "Fuuma, stop", occasionally. Poor guy.