dead man walking

[wytchcroft]

could have been that
dead man walking
turning to gold
shaking loose
that Lazarus lump

Comments

[autumnsea]

Adore this. The repetition really works for me, especially "could have been that".

What I love most though is this expression, "restless amazed". I felt it and it left me breathless. :))

[wytchcroft]

wow that was quick! thank you :))
this was just a doodle, sometimes no sense makes the most sense, to me :))

[autumnsea]

I like *doodles*. I tend to partake in them, as well. :))

[wytchcroft]

ps - i haven't had a chance to catch up with everyone today, but i'll be dropping in on you tomorrow evening, see you then :))

[stoshagownozad]

lile in Metropolis!

[wytchcroft]

yes, yes! :)))

[wytchcroft]

thank you my friend! :))

[java_fiend]

I really like this one. I love that 5th stanza most of all. Really well done.

[wytchcroft]

cheers! :))

[betsycontent]

love it :)

[wytchcroft]

that makes it worth the posting :))

[betsycontent]

sorry i'm so far behind with my comments. you had a poem posted a month or two ago that was especially brilliant. i will look for it again and comment soon.

[wytchcroft]

truthfully, i don't give a f--k about your comments, i DO give a f--k about YOU. it's just nice to know you're there, silly :))

*HUGE HUGS*