dead man walking

Apr 25, 2010 04:13

could have been that
dead man walking
turning to gold
shaking loose
that Lazarus lump
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science fiction, days, fragment, speedwriting

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autumnsea April 25 2010, 03:17:30 UTC
Adore this. The repetition really works for me, especially "could have been that".

What I love most though is this expression, "restless amazed". I felt it and it left me breathless. :))

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wytchcroft April 25 2010, 03:19:52 UTC
wow that was quick! thank you :))
this was just a doodle, sometimes no sense makes the most sense, to me :))

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autumnsea April 25 2010, 03:24:59 UTC
I like *doodles*. I tend to partake in them, as well. :))

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wytchcroft April 25 2010, 03:21:51 UTC
ps - i haven't had a chance to catch up with everyone today, but i'll be dropping in on you tomorrow evening, see you then :))

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autumnsea April 25 2010, 03:24:15 UTC
You are too kind, my friend. Thank you. :)

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wytchcroft April 25 2010, 03:25:52 UTC
pish! it will be my pleasure! :)))

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