Yes, I joined just to contribute. Sssh.

[generous_night]

 Uh, right. So hi. I haven't posted anything here before, but, um - I like the idea of them being quite in love. So I wrote them like that. But I also like them being insanely kinky, so. Uh. Tada?
If there was something else I was meant to say or do first, I'm sorry. o n o I'm just going to go hide in the corner now.
Also, I didn't link all my pages

Comments

[lady_wormtongue]

Bless your kinky little heart. I swear there hasn't been any new fic of this pairing in months, and they are my very favorite!

I really like the way you made Nelly so eager and hopped up on adrenaline and lust, and the tenderness from Rolf. And the inhaler bit is a nice little touch of realism (and shows you did your homework, haha)

Thanks for sharing, I hope you write more for these two!

[generous_night]

Thanks very much. <3 I'm always super happy to know I've captured a good atmosphere in my writing.
Unfortunately, I've just been informed that the inhaler was not realistic, for an early moment in their relationship, since asthma was considered to be psychosomatic from the '30s to the '50s, and those treatments weren't around until the '60s. (My excuse is that the Watchmen universe differs in a few ways, and - well, psychologists have plenty to entertain them with masked adventurers without deciding that asthma-wheezing is 'the suppressed cry of the child for its mother', and since medicine had already been attempting to help for millennia, progress was made. Ssh.)

And I will! I have a crazy mess of ideas, including an epic AU the likes of which normally only Daniel/Rorschach receives. c:

Also, the compliments means a lot coming from you. Thank you. <3

[lady_wormtongue]

Okay, so if not realism, at least accuracy to the character. =P I didn't know that about attitudes towards asthma but I like your explanation, haha.

"Also, the compliments means a lot coming from you. Thank you. <3"

Aww, that's sweet of you to say. :D

[ryntha_doghare]

Unrelated, but, icon love. (Sadly I do not have a Hitchhiker's icon to use.)

[ryntha_doghare]

Guh, blood + blowjobs = niiice. Though I'm pleased you still made sure there was some love between them, because I can never get over the guilt of enjoying kink if the characters aren't enjoying it. Nicely written!

(Though, towards the beginning: "the cream colour gone heady dark red." Did you mean heavy, or am I just failing at adjectives today?)

[generous_night]

Heady: adjective
-(of liquor) potent; intoxicating: 'several bottles of local heady wine', etc.
-having a strong or exhilarating effect: 'the heady days of the birth of the women's movement', 'a heady perfume', etc.

It's not that commonly used, and I'm surprised you're the first person to comment, but yeah, it's meant to be 'heady'. c: I use a lot of mildly obscure words, at times, because I try to describe things in a very sensory manner, and language leans less and less towards that, these days.

[ryntha_doghare]

Whup, sorry about that. Hey, you learn something new every day.

[generous_night]

Not a problem at all. <3 It's a nice little (slightly smug, I'll admit, but hey, we all have our flaws) thrill to teach something.
Also, as you're someone who actually read this, I have a question: would some slightly complicated angst be welcomed at all here, do you think?