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writteninhaste

fic: Nemo Vir Est Qui Mundum Non Reddat Meliorem 2/2

Jul 17, 2010 02:28

Title: Nemo Vir Est Qui Mundum Non Reddat Meliorem
Author: writteninhaste previously feathergirl89
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Content of asexual nature. Violence. Mentions of abortion. Girl!Merlin (after a fashion)
Spoilers: Spoilers for Kingdom of Heaven (sort of) and for Merlin: Season 1
Notes: Written for the reel_merlin movie prompt Kingdom of Heaven . Many thanks to my anonymous non- ( Read more... )

genre: future!fic, slash, genre: oneshot, genre: drama, character: arthur, fanfic, length: oneshot, kingdom of heaven, fanfiction, genre: au, genre: one shot, author: writteninhaste, pairing: arthur/merlin, spoilers, reel_merlin, merlin, rating: nc-17, warning: abortion, character: merlin, genre: angst, type: slash

Comments 12

archaeologist_d July 17 2010, 03:04:34 UTC

I thought you did a great job showing the dust and despair of Jerusalem and the movie. I'd hoped for a happy ending but figured it was unlikely with that movie. Well done.

monicaop July 17 2010, 04:03:22 UTC

You combined 2 of my favorite stories, even if you used more of an historical approach to Balian than the movie, but oh my... this broke my heart, really.

It was amazingly well written, but so, so sad. Be well

laceyintheskyy July 17 2010, 05:38:32 UTC

my heart just shattered into a million little pieces. this made me cry.

frames_in_aria July 17 2010, 05:52:36 UTC

That was bitter, but powerful, and oh, poor Merlin D:

lifeisanorange July 17 2010, 09:27:59 UTC

Oh, that was painful. Deep in the gut, that hit.

In the water, the ghost of Arthur stood beside him, running a hand softly over Merlin’s hair, pressing his lips to the skin of Merlin’s temple.

This line really had me tearing up. GUH. You're writing throughout didn't help much either, being all gorgeously descriptive and heartbreaking. God, Merlin.