Comments | writtendlessly: U-Kiss, Soohyun-focused

writtendlessly

U-Kiss, Soohyun-focused - A Most Beautiful Ruby Red

Oct 13, 2011 22:18

Title: A Most Beautiful Ruby Red
Pairing: None, Soohyun-focused
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "Slow motion; see me let go." Soohyun is slipping, falling further into the abyss, and he's not sure he wants to fight it anymore.
Warnings: Subtle, subtle hints about contemplating suicide.
A/N: I wrote this around the time Soohyun was tweeting about being tired and ( Read more... )

fandom: u-kiss, pairing: none

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A SPOT FOR ME~ happy_girl89 October 17 2011, 08:55:15 UTC

please comment here so i'll be notified.^^

Re: A SPOT FOR ME~ writtendlessly October 17 2011, 19:01:40 UTC

elvenknight16 October 17 2011, 12:23:58 UTC

This is beautiful~
Am I wrong to assume that maybe, Soohyun is your most favorite member?
Anyway, the words touched me, because somehow it all seems so true.
Great Job Sweetie ^^
Hope to read more amazing works from you!

writtendlessly October 17 2011, 19:02:01 UTC

thank you! yes, soohyun is my favorite. he's my ultimate bias out of all of kpop, tbh.

elvenknight16 October 17 2011, 20:20:40 UTC

I'm glad then ^^
Soohyun is one of my top biases as well~
Take Care Hun =]

athenasweapon October 17 2011, 17:08:17 UTC

It's almost sad that maybe not 100% of this but most of it would be something I personally have assumed he's been thinking.

And it makes me sad.
This was very well written, absolutely touching. I won't say beautiful because it's not, but the words you used to describe it definitely are.
Great job :)

writtendlessly October 17 2011, 19:02:56 UTC

thank you so much! i spend/spent a lot of time wondering and worrying about what he's thinking and i tried my best to portray it as accurately as possible!

silverstorm666 November 4 2011, 02:36:27 UTC

wow. I think there's too many tears in my eyes to see clearly to make a proper comment. Our Soohyun is so sad lately. :(

writtendlessly November 4 2011, 02:37:20 UTC

aww i'm sorry :( he is~

suitofarmour February 23 2013, 07:07:19 UTC

wow this is not okay
NOT. OKAY. shara bby why do you do this why
whyyy

ok i just
this is such a good description of depression. it really is. i don't want to say great -- i don't want to associate anything great with depression; it just doesn't feel right -- but god, i dunno

it fits. i think if you've been depressed, reading this just feels all too familiar, and even if you haven't, it's probably easy to empathise with the way this is written -- the repetition of things like "slipping" and "warm" is really a nice touch; "warm" for example is such a simple word, such a simple feeling, but it's universal and everyone can sort of slip into soo's shoes and go, oh, right, that and the whole thing evokes so much feeling with such simple wording ( ... )

writtendlessly February 23 2013, 17:06:21 UTC

ah thank you ;_____________ ( ... )

suitofarmour February 26 2013, 04:54:29 UTC

s'okay about being long~ there is nobody who says more uselessly wordy and unnecessary things as me, i'm not judging ( ... )

writtendlessly February 27 2013, 23:58:06 UTC

you're giving me feels for my own fic stop it ;_____; all interpreting shit that wasn't even intentional, like his only selfish act and all that. ;;; it's tru tho sobs ;;;

like, as much as i don't really believe in the martyr image anymore (at least so far as i don't believe it's all coming from him) it still really is what he would do/think, i guess. like, he wants to do the best he can for them, maybe he thinks that's his job bc of being leader, but he's a human too and i believe if he got a chance to just, idk, take a break for himself that he would.

sorry this isn't as long of a response but ty ;___; i'm glad you liked it

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